Wild West - Chapter 12 - Part 5 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

Chapter 9

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16

Chapter 10

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22

Chapter 11

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 1415, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23

Chapter 12

1, 2, 3, 4

Part 5


James couldn't believe his eyes when he turned away from the drawer after finding a box of matches. He wanted to shout at his son, but no voice came from his mouth. He could only stand there, frozen into place, and observe his son gulping down Cryosatane faster than he would whiskey.

Tom kept on swallowing the shining liquid even when he's had way more liquid than his body could ever carry – Cryosatane must've been working its magic. He didn't stop until the reservoir was empty and the last drop fell loose from the pipe. He then gracefully stood up and faced James.

They were staring at each other for at least five seconds, speechless, then Tom raised an eyebrow at James, as if to ask him what he’s looking at him for. James was still stunned and couldn’t say a word. He only made a weird grimace and kept on staring at his son.

Tom started feeling the power of Cryosatane coursing through his veins. He looked at the cigarette in James’ mouth, imagined it lit, and it lit up by itself. In love with his newly attained power, he wanted to do more. He opened and slammed shut the door, made the drawers fly out of the desk and signed himself onto the table the same way one would using a knife.

James just stood there and observed. He was both excited and afraid of what he was witnessing. After all, his son could collapse and die any second just like Kirk did.


Disclaimer: The full story is in its unfinished state. All content is tentative to change.

Link to part 6


The prompt was:

"Graceful"


Books I have written so far:

While I haven't published any yet, I am looking for a cover designer for my upcoming book.
To give you a general idea of what it is about, here's an abstract I wrote about it:

With the modern society facing an ever greater struggle with an increase in obesity and obsession with diets, the author looks at the psychology behind the reason the average person eats more food than necessary and obsesses with increasingly more severe dieting. The author aims to promote the reader to challenge their relationship with food by providing the necessary tools to battle their existing food disorders and achieve their (diet related) goals.


Short stories I have written so far:

Brutal
Funny/Misc
Happy ending
Gross
#1 - Living off the grid
#3 - A young thief
#8 - A traitor from hell
#9 - Not alone
#10 - Millitary testing grounds
#13 - Bigfoot
#14 - And angel in love with a whore
#15 - Down the rabbit hole
#18 - Reborn as a 10 year old
#19 - A struggling door to door salesman
#24 - Rebellious talking food
#26 - Ssssnails!
#28 - Mission Erased
#32 - Dog's breath
#38 - Abducted
#42 - Killer clowns
#43 - A penny
#44 - Fear
#49 - Morning coffee
#50 - Midnight sunshine
#51 - My new home
#2 - A dolphin tea party
#4 - Stained hands
#7 - The giant depressed onion
#21 - The red star
#25 - Long-distance Relationship
#27 - A dream
#30 - Potato
#31 - Dragons
#33 - The Jungle
#35 - A life lesson
#36 - Unicorn meat
#39 - The Purple Road
#40 - Immortal Store Clerk
#41 - Artemis' Hell
#46 - A scientist's journal
#47 - One of many
#48 - Gone in 10




#5 - The homeless man
#6 - A blind date
#11 - The wealthy man
#12 - Happy ending
#16 - Asshole soulmate
#17 - My bunny Fluffy
#20 - War veteran
#22 - Wishing to meet a villain
#23 - School trip
#45 - Crafted armor












#29 - Green Chewing Gum
#34 - Turkey Trauma
#37 - Stuck in a loop





















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Five minute freewrite challenges I have fulfilled so far:

Fire, Toilet, Flash, Soft feet, Pillow, Grounding, Surprise, Ending the pain, Going for a walk, Car Mechanic, Murderer, Dog hair, Ducks, Untested medicine, Forbidden love, Vacation, Awakening, Dentist, Wild west.


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Exciting and dangerous. Makes me feel that the lit cigarette might ignite the disgested Cryosatane!

Here's a juicy new prompt for you: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-284-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-mango

Hmmm. That seems like an interesting idea... ~~ Maybe at a future time... maybe :p

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