Wild West - Chapter 11 - Part 4 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

Chapter 9

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16

Chapter 10

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22

Chapter 11

1, 2, 3

Part 4


“So how much longer to Berq?” Tom asked after about 20 minutes walking – James was on the horse that time around.

“Not much. A 20 minute horse ride. Just on the other side of that hill.” The guard pointed at a smaller hill not too far away from them.

“How big is this thing?” Tom inquired further, and James made sure to ride close enough to overhear the entirety of the conversation.

“You’ve been to Ätherock, right? That’s a worker city. Berq is much, much smaller in terms of size, but it’s prestige all around. Only for the noble men. And the king, of course.”

James laughed. “What do you consider as noble?”

“Scientists and city representatives. Not a whole lot of people.”

Tom then remembered that he and James still have no idea about other worker cities. “City representatives? Just how many such cities like Ätherock are there?”

“You mean mining cities? Two more, but both smaller than Ätherock.”

“No, no, I mean how many cities are there total, and what is their field of work?”

“There’s six agricultural cities, a wood and metal working city which is the largest, a city devoted to the millitary and the research facilities are here in Berq. The rest is like this,” the guard raised his hands and looked around, “uninhabited.”


Disclaimer: The full story is in its unfinished state. All content is tentative to change.

Link to part 5


The prompt was:

"The millitary"


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I turn your writing prompts into stories.

Previous writing prompts I have fulfilled:

Brutal
Funny/Misc
Happy ending
Gross
#1 - Living off the grid
#3 - A young thief
#8 - A traitor from hell
#9 - Not alone
#10 - Millitary testing grounds
#13 - Bigfoot
#14 - And angel in love with a whore
#15 - Down the rabbit hole
#18 - Reborn as a 10 year old
#19 - A struggling door to door salesman
#24 - Rebellious talking food
#26 - Ssssnails!
#28 - Mission Erased
#32 - Dog's breath
#38 - Abducted
#42 - Killer clowns
#43 - A penny
#44 - Fear
#49 - Morning coffee
#50 - Midnight sunshine
#2 - A dolphin tea party
#4 - Stained hands
#7 - The giant depressed onion
#21 - The red star
#25 - Long-distance Relationship
#27 - A dream
#30 - Potato
#31 - Dragons
#33 - The Jungle
#35 - A life lesson
#36 - Unicorn meat
#39 - The Purple Road
#40 - Immortal Store Clerk
#41 - Artemis' Hell
#46 - A scientist's journal
#47 - One of many
#48 - Gone in 10



#5 - The homeless man
#6 - A blind date
#11 - The wealthy man
#12 - Happy ending
#16 - Asshole soulmate
#17 - My bunny Fluffy
#20 - War veteran
#22 - Wishing to meet a villain
#23 - School trip
#45 - Crafted armor











#29 - Green Chewing Gum
#34 - Turkey Trauma
#37 - Stuck in a loop




















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@svashta, @svashta...we need your selfie. 40 minutes

Argh. -.- I really should've checked to make sure that it uploaded the comment, because it didn't... ugh.
Thank you so very much though!

You're welcome @svashta, I hope it's accepted. I had to scroll a long way to find a selfie of you. 😂

Likewise, I hope it counts - especially because the new freewrite hadn't been posted yet... I'll be read sad to see the streak end now, but if it does, well... It's my own damn fault, after all.

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Bruni is so good to you!! And don't complain about the prompt. I know you can do it!! There got to be an ornate something at the fancy city your are going toward...
Your next prompt is here!! Let’s see how you can embellish your story!! The prompt

And enter the We-Write at the Freewrite House. $ SBI shares are up for grabs!!
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=.= Fine! I won't complain no more!
At least not out loud.
But know that deep inside me... Silently... I am judging... :P

hahaha - you know how it is - to bring out more of your genius, we need to push you - or you can just place this prompt at the end of your book some day LOL

No, no, no, I'll include everything in the freewrites, and edit out if necessary later on when I'm editing the work.
I enjoy a good challenge :P
But thanks for the kind words, though! Means a lot!

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