Wild West - Chapter 9 - Part 9 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3
Chapter 4

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Chapter 5

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Chapter 6

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Chapter 7

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Chapter 8

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10

Chapter 9

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8

Part 9


Like two detectives they kept looking around, trying to find anything that could be of use in their upcoming escape, but to no avail. The plan they had come up with earlier was the only one that could potentially work.

Having dumped the ore onto the train, they went back toward the mine. An empty wheelbarrow down a steep hill was no joke either. One slip on a rock and one could fall down the slope with ease.

When they reached the bottom, they were instruced into a tunnel – as they expected. The guards were counting the workers they let into a tunnel, and the two got positioned somewhere in the middle of it. There were no miners inside yet, so when they reached their position, they both sat down and relaxed.

It didn't take long for them to show up, though, and the moment work started they were most interested in what will be dumped in their wheelbarrows. Seeing as rock was thrown into the wheelbarrows next to theirs, and not their own, they were both very happy to learn they were collecting ore that time around.


Disclaimer: The full story is in its unfinished state. All content is tentative to change.

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"Detective"


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Previous writing prompts I have fulfilled:

Brutal
Funny/Misc
Happy ending
Gross
#1 - Living off the grid
#3 - A young thief
#8 - A traitor from hell
#9 - Not alone
#10 - Millitary testing grounds
#13 - Bigfoot
#14 - And angel in love with a whore
#15 - Down the rabbit hole
#18 - Reborn as a 10 year old
#19 - A struggling door to door salesman
#24 - Rebellious talking food
#26 - Ssssnails!
#28 - Mission Erased
#32 - Dog's breath
#38 - Abducted
#42 - Killer clowns
#43 - A penny
#44 - Fear
#2 - A dolphin tea party
#4 - Stained hands
#7 - The giant depressed onion
#21 - The red star
#25 - Long-distance Relationship
#27 - A dream
#30 - Potato
#31 - Dragons
#33 - The Jungle
#35 - A life lesson
#36 - Unicorn meat
#39 - The Purple Road
#40 - Immortal Store Clerk
#41 - Artemis' Hell
#46 - A scientist's journal
#47 - One of many
#48 - Gone in 10

#5 - The homeless man
#6 - A blind date
#11 - The wealthy man
#12 - Happy ending
#16 - Asshole soulmate
#17 - My bunny Fluffy
#20 - War veteran
#22 - Wishing to meet a villain
#23 - School trip
#45 - Crafted armor









#29 - Green Chewing Gum
#34 - Turkey Trauma
#37 - Stuck in a loop


















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Fire, Toilet, Flash, Soft feet, Pillow, Grounding, Surprise, Ending the pain, Going for a walk, Car Mechanic, Murderer, Dog hair, Ducks, Untested medicine, Forbidden love, Vacation, Awakening, Dentist, Wild west.


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Finally!! They are going to get their hands on the ore!!

They need to see where it's being taken, and what it's used for. Without knowing its use... its worthless. :p

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