Wild West - Chapter 10 - Part 8 - 5 minute freewrite challenge
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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
First thing they did was scan the giant room for potential danger – guards. They intermixed themselves with the workers, walked alongside them and just observed their surroudings. Much to their relief it appeared that other than the one guard per melting pot the room was completely void of overseers. None of the melting pots appeared to be running, and the workers were all filling up the first one still.
Seeing as they were in no danger of being exposed, they sat down in one of the slightly darker areas of the building, opposed to the melting pots. They wanted to have good view over what they do with the smelt.
As they sat down, they saw a bright blueish light on the ceiling on the other side of the building. It was a tint bluer than that of Lyterite and much more intense. They wanted to go and check it out, when they heard the guard atop the first ramp yelling at the workers. The workers were instructed to leave the ramp and go dump the ore into the next iron pot.
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This story has become less western and more post-apocalyptic!
Well, it's a western outside the dome... but under it... It's... As you said... apocalyptic. Not yet Post, since the apocalypse is yet to happen.... ... Hope I didn't tell too much right there. :P
@svashta Spoilers!
It's a teaser, not a spoiler!
Think of it as the equivalent of the programmer's
"It's a feature, not a bug." :P
@svashta Sounds good. But previews always show too much!
Yeah... and they always show all the interesting stuff and leave nothing behind for the actual movie/book....
Hmmm. My bad. :|
@svashta :P
The description was written so well that I felt like I was there. : )
Resident cat here, right on cue delivering today's prompt: dew
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-237-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-dew
That's downright amazing to hear!
Thank you so very much! :D