@Termitemusic's Worldwide Cypher Jam Round # 24 Entry: "Family" (Original Song)

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I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.


My entry for @Termitemusic's World Cypher Jam Round #24
I won 1st place in @Jamesgetsit's Kill The Pad Challenge Wk # 5, the theme being Family, and entered a late submission using @Termitemusic's real smooth, laid back jazz hop instrumental. Hope you enjoy the good positive vibes.



Beat “Unfold Time” Produced By @Termitemusic

@Verbal-D
Verse 1:
The absence of your father doesn't mean you cannot be one
Just be there for your children, building, healing 'til you see some...
Progress in the modest parent process teaching freedoms
But limitations, and consequences, values also feed 'em...

The aspects of a family, definition and true meaning
Is not based upon lab tests of genetics shown on blue screenings...
Blood's thicker than the water, but most fluid is your being
The people who care about you, with a love farthest from fleeting...

I'm my brother's keeper, won't neglect my sisters either
Taking care of all my loved ones, never be a wife beater...
Family trees are slow-grown, steady strong as White Cedars
Branching out, but still connected, roots are like a flight deeper...

Get wisdom and true manners, Grandma, Grandpa's got the answers
Remember, and making memories, lessons they share Do Matter...
Show gratitude to Mother, Aunts and Uncles, all your Cousins
Nephews, nieces are the sweetest, whether one or more than dozens...



Song Lyrics Copyrighted By Verbal D


If you missed my other previous Melodious Music Memoirs, including Open Mic Contest Wk Entries, Please click on the provided links below:


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This is indeed awesome @verbal-d!! Love the family vibe and how you go straight to the heart of the matter!

I also love that long long long list of sound creations!! Wow! That is an impressive collection. I'm astounded!! Great work @verbal-d. Thank you for bringing such love to the blockchain!

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words. Yes, I just jump right into it head on, I am continually adding to my library of achievements and Steemit.com has helped me to organize all of my creations. Appreciate you checking this one out, you know there is more to come :)

That's part of what is so great.....just when wishing for more my dreams come true---oh wait...they were already true before I asked! Thanks for being you @verbal-d. You're a one-of-a-kind! Thank god for you!!!

Thank god for you as well. You Are. You Arle You Are One of the best and more kind and sincere people on Steemit. I think you would really enjoy this expression from me. You know where I come from and this represents what i do and why.

https://steemit.com/my2018/@verbal-d/my2018-this-is-my-hobby-creating-and-sharing-positive-conscious-and-inspiring-hip-hop-music-to-all-original-blog-rap-verse

YES brother!!! This is too dope and the message is REAL!!!!!

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Thank you very much, so glad you enjoyed this one, fresh beat bro, and I appreciate the gif!

RESPECT!!! when im reviewing music ive made I mess about with stuff like this!! You dont have to use it if you dont want but I thought it looked pretty striking!! haha (AND YOU MAKE FIRE!!!!!!)

Wow, i love those lyrics. The fact you talk about love, unity and knowledge makes it a big bomb for me. You gat me longing for more. Beautiful

Thank you very much for stopping by and giving this a listen, it was a fun and inspiring verse to create. Yes love, unity knowledge and family appreciation is a big highlight in this one. Many thanks for your kind words.

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Thank you very much, appreciate the follow and your initiative

Yes boss! You got flow. I'm just starting to learn and I tried a pace like this the other night but man it takes lungs! I think I saw you breath once lol

Thank you very much for listening to this verse. It definitely takes lungs and being able to write it rhythmically and syllabically to fit your current emcee abilities. Cater your writing to your abilities and expand as you grow in skill. I do quick short breaths in between couplets and triplets of lines to go for a more fluid and smooth flow where the breaths aren't overly noticeable. Takes practice and I still need to improve

Thank bro, that sounds like good advice to me. I'm just getting into this and trying to develop a style but it is more technical than I first thought(Isn't everything though?). I prefer this pace of rapping as it just feels full of depth and content. My vocab is ok but I need to work on more imaginative ways of describing things. Time will tell and so far I am enjoying the challenge. See you around buddy and I've already chucked an entry in for next weeks challenge. Hope to see you there too :) Peace

It is definitely technical, some rap unorthodox, but it is definitely good to learn the fundamentals. Wish you the best of success, and if I do enter this week's challenge, I might be late lol Peace

Yes to family! Nice flow lyrical flow. - David

Yes indeed to family and love. Thanks for listening. Appreciate you

You're quick! Thanks so much for checking this out @simgirl, glad you enjoyed it.

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Nice stuff man :)
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Thanks for checking this out, glad you liked it. Appreciate that.
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