Melodious Music Memoirs # 2: Impact

in #music8 years ago (edited)

This song is dedicated to my unborn son who will be brought into this world in a matter of days. It could be anytime now when we need to rush to the hospital. I'm truly blessed to have my own family and experience all the wonderful moments of love, learning life lessons and heartwarming memories that it entails. I'm also excited that my daughter Harmony will finally be a big sister soon and will not grow up an only child. Raising a family is not always easy but it's so rewarding throughout the hardships and laughter. Big thanks to my good friend Rico Raicoz for the amazing production beat. We will be working on a future collaboration project album together.

Please enjoy the song.

Song lyrics provided below.

Song's Due Credits:

Beat/Instrumental Produced by Rico Raicoz


Verse 1 & 2 Written, Created & Performed by Verbal D


Chorus Melody Written, Created & Performed by Verbal D



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Side Note: If you have a father, or a father figure, call them up and tell them you love them, even visit them. If you are a father, tell and show your children you love them. If you are a father to be, congratulations and enjoy the journey once it begins. :)

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FULL SONG LYRIC'S HERE:

Impact

Verbal D
Chorus:
Every person that I meet
Every new location that I reach
Tryna make an impact, impact
There's a reason for the things I choose to do, what I say
I'm tryna make an impact
While I still can

Verbal D
Verse 1:
Never wanted to make music where you're lost in my words
I like to map it all out, give directional turns
Take you on another journey if you're willing to learn
So to reach higher degrees we let the temperature burn

Step out your comfort zone, can not be limited, like a hunter drone
You can only go so far, til you're uncontrolled
Overheads to rock bottom, and even under roads
Don't mind the haters, debaters who speak in undertones

Don't gotta try so hard, show non-conformity
It's not a chore to me, the purpose, the music is more than me
Even the music's intentions mean more to me
If you wanna make a wave then you've got to explore the sea

Only original mind, never declining to forgery
So You can feel the passion no magic or sorcery
Captivate an audience, acapella or chorus free
Inspiration-driven lyrics, delivering cordially

Verbal D
Chorus:
Every person that I meet
Every new location that I reach
Tryna make an impact, impact
There's a reason for the things I choose to do, what I say
I'm tryna make an impact
While I still can


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Verbal D
Verse 2:
Look at my body of work
It's without a rhyme with a curse
Knowing that my only children will acknowledge it first
So to be a role model, I prepare for the birth
My first son is on his way, to make his mark on the earth

Meteor shower indentations, volcanic craters erupting
The power, yes he can take it, (start) building something constructive
Allowing knowledge to waken, a statement breaking assumptions
Tower the cowards waiting, who blatantly make destruction

Give him a bible, a moral compass, direction
If he ever mirrors me, I pray to God, the best reflection
Cause even me at my best I confess , I see it was not enough
I prevent the damage, and sadness,
Maybe he'll follow up

You care about somebody? Got to see that through
Cause only Love'll open up and never collapse you
We've got to learn from our mistakes and never go back too
So if I can't impact my kids, how can I impact you?

Verbal D
Chorus:
Every person that I meet
Every new location that I reach
Tryna make an impact, impact
There's a reason for the things I choose to do, what I say
I'm tryna make an impact
While I still can (x2)

Song Lyrics Copyright by Verbal D

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Just gotta say, your talents are ridiculous, bro! Your unique flow interchanging between rap and singing is truly a gift and you excel at both. Just don't stop and keep pushing forward. Fantastic stuff!!!

I feel there is always room for improvement, besides my wife, I'm one of my hardest critics. Appreciate your extremely kind ridiculously gracious compliment. It took some years to master the transitioning phase between tightly knitted singing and rapping verses. I'll keep pushing onward, thank you so much for your support. It means alot

Brother it just keeps getting better and better. I'm loving this J Dilla style drum riddim with your smooth melodies. I'm gonna start recording some hip hop beats after I drop my album, we should link on a track!

I love J Dilla's style, it is so powerful. Thank you very much for taking time out to listen to this one. I had a lot of fun creating it. I'm looking forward to hearing your album, let me know how to listen to it, and if you plan to share it here. I'm definitely open to linking up on music no doubt.

Your most welcome. Yes I am releasing it on here I've just been waiting on a piece of art to do my introducemyself photo (which I wanted to put out first). I should have my first song out today, if not tomorrow and will continue releasing until full album is out. I'm a professional drummer and have built my own home studio over the last few years so we're good to go~ Bless

Nice I'm really looking forward to that without a doubt. Stay blessed bro

Thank you for the compliment and for listening. I hope my singing was just as impactful.

Yes, the singing was good too!
Usually rappers aren't able to sing, while you were great at it!!
I also think it would be good to have a female voice chorusing with you :)

Thank you bro, your insight is appreciated. Sometimes it is difficult to balance, you're either good at one thing and subpar at another, but I aimed at trying to play piano and produce beats as well. I'll be releasing future posts showcasing those talents as well. And I agree with you, a female singer would be a nice touch for harmonies. My wife sings, maybe I can convince her to join me on a song soon for steemit. But I've written songs with some talented female artists before, it adds a wonderful dynamic to the song texture.

I have to say your singing is good but your rapping is just great!
Probably having to switch from one to another is a problem too :)

Thank you for your kind words. It is sometimes difficult for me to choose between the two so usually I incorporate both in my music. A lot of people tend to enjoy my singing more than my rapping, but I tend to like my rapping more than my singing. They are both equally difficult to master but I love the fast changing of rhythm with rap.

Beautiful, all around I enjoyed this track thoroughly.

Your flow is superb! Phenomenal word choice. I look forward to a fully produced version of this if there will be one! :D

Thank you very much for the encouragement and support! So glad the song impacted you the way it did. There will definitely be a fully produced version and I'll post it on my sound cloud as a single while preparing the album with Rico Raicoz in the near future. Your kind words humble me. I am very passionate about my music.

upvoted. my daughter showed up also in September but 4 years ago)))

Thank you for checking out my song. Congratulations on your daughter, I'm sure she is a bundle of joy and provides you so many sweet memories. They grow so fast, feels like I wake up everyday and Harmony is speaking and doing things more independently with so much personality and imagination

Nice stuff.

You are now being followed by Thirsty Records.

Keep bringing that funk!

I Appreciate the follow, thank you for checking out my music, I'll definitely keep the supply of music steady :)

You got those lyrics flowing nicely. Well written, and performed, too. Beats, words, flow. You got it here. Deserves lots of respect. Prayers for the new arrival :)

Thank you very much, sometimes when it flows it flows, staying true to myself, my message and intention helps the song completion throughout the creating process. Once I've gained traction, I add to the momentum hoping to bring every listener a bit of my passion. Appreciate the feedback, the prayers and respect. I don't take your words for granted.

Good stuff my man. I like the message and your delivery was good.

I wasn't sure which way the song was headed at first but I dug the hook. I was honestly shocked when you started to flow because I thought you were going to sing.

There aren't a lot of people out there that can do both. Feel blessed.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Will upvote at the 30 minute mark.

Much appreciated bro. You provide me such detailed feedback and I am really grateful to have you as one of my listeners. I'm glad you were able to enjoy the song and experience the Unexpected. Sometimes I don't know where I go with my music when I write and create, I just let it flow first, then I structure it properly after I solidify my ideas. I definitely feel blessed to have these God given gifts of
Music. Just doing my best to share the positivity and especially a good message! I'll post again soon enough, thanks again for your support

No problem. I promoted you in some of the big boy channels. Hopefully the whales pound that upvote button for you. Forgot to mention that the beat was well put together and I got a J. Cole feel from the instrumental.

You went out of your way for me. You didn't need to do that for me, but I'm grateful you have. I hope a whale comes across it and can take something positive from it. I would love some upvotes, who wouldn't? Thank you again, and yeah Rico is very crafty on the production side, I love his J.Dilla, Boom Bap 90s Hip Hop style.

Masterpiece! Always surprised about your talent.

Thank you for your kind response and continued support. I hope to keep surprising you along the way. I do what I can as best as I can.

Crazy my youngest was born sep 21 2016! 5 days away from your son. You got serious pitch control my G! Goosebumps again brother!

Thank you bro, you are a true supporter. I really appreciate the love you show and I am glad to provide you goosebumps. Music can truly inspire and change lives, that is why I love your daughter's song more than any of that regular kill hurt sex rap you be writing about. But it is all preference at the end of the day. My goal and aim is what separates me from the rest, and I aim to inspire others to take up the same burden: it is too easy to rap and make negative music. point blank period.

I am effective with my music and verses because I believe what I am writing and sharing, and if I were to give out evil, which I am capable of, I could easily resort to darkness and hatred as a place to write my rhymes, but I alleviate the pain within me through a positive light, so that is what you will hear from me, cause I know other people are hurting and need help, uplifting words and love as well.

The only time I write dark is when I do story telling, to show my fictional writing side or to express a pain that is very deep.
Thanks for listening again bro.

Happy belated birthday to your beautiful blessing/son

music makes the world go round my friend! You're definitely a conscious rapper and man, i'm a conscious man that sometimes rap consciously. I think it has a lot to do with my favourite era of rap "90's gangsta rap" and how i started rapping, battle rapping where you destroy your opponent and cyphers where the person who spits the illest hardcore bars gets the love of the party. Also i used to be a very hateful and violent person...gangbanging, jumping people-getting jumped, prison, etc. But all that changed when i had my family.
And Andy B is more of the conscious rapper in the duo and i'm more ultra-violent-hardcore rapper(our little ying yang)
Listen to these tracks and you'll see i'm a little more well rounded than you think-https://steemit.com/smlchallenge/@kenentertainment/positive-energy
https://steemit.com/rap/@kenentertainment/kickin-off-tha-night
https://steemit.com/rap/@kenentertainment/wanna-lay-you-down
And here's some from Andy B-https://steemit.com/rap/@kenentertainment/buddhist-monk-ways
https://steemit.com/rap/@kenentertainment/care-it-s-a-good-song-with-a-good-message-enjoy
https://steemit.com/rap/@kenentertainment/educate-thank-you-to-all-my-followers-check-out-my-blog-for-more-and-up-vote-this-please-https-steemit-com-got16s

I havn't heard anything back from @rondonson on the "Main Girl" song....is he just busy or curving me? Either way your awsome and if we lived in the same city i feel like we'd get really close and make music 2gether...One love brother

He definitely isn't curving you bro, sometimes it takes me a week or two to get a response, he is really busy. You just gotta have patience bro lol

I will definitely check out those other songs of yours
That makes sense for your background
I am actually a big fan of battle rap and have seen about 80-90% of battle rap released through battle leagues like RBE, Black Ice Cartel, URLTV, KOTD, Don'tFlop, BullPenBattleLeague, WeGoHard, and others. Jayblac1615 is my favourite battle blogger, you should check out his youtube channel bro

Battle rap is definitely something I respect for the pen game, performance, delivery, wittiness and more

Yeah we would definitely be chopping it up on music if we were close by but luckily we met and connected on steemit. One love bro

Yea i'm glad i meet you bro

Likewise bro. Glad to have met you too

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