@VoyceAtlas's GOT16s Lyrical Contest # 1: My Entry - "Passionate Poetics" Part 3 (Original Song)
I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.
Verse 1:
I always got a sixteen, jewelry in (16) Gold Carats
Problems like six teens, unruly with no parents
Cold world, doesn't help that my coat's tearing
Student of the game, so I'm all about note sharing...
I write my own rhymes, and I do it with no swearing
I embody music, can't mute it, my soul's blaring
A beacon of light, I'm more than a glow flaring
Shining inner linings of finding a hope therein...
First I gotta map this
Can’t speak for the world, It’s silent traveling
No voice of an atlas
I’m all around the globe, God has given me access
Balancing my spirit, titling over on axis
Whatever I write down, a quill for my practice
So tired I lay down, a quilt for my mattress
My music gives you all of me, I’m that passionate
I always stay driven, if I drift, I’m not crashing it......
Song Lyrics Copyrighted By @Verbal-D
If you missed my other previous Rap Challenge Wk, Hip Hop MC Challenge, & GOT16s Lyrical Entries, Please click on the provided links below:
Rap Challenge Wk # 2: Role Model First, Emcee Second
Rap Challenge Wk # 4: Bringer Of Life
Rap Challenge Wk # 5: Deep, Lingering Pain
Rap Challenge Wk # 6: A Gorge Of Love In A Valley Of Hate
Rap Challenge Wk # 7: Steemit Hip Hop Community
Rap Challenge Wk # 8: Everybody Wants To Be An Original
Rap Challenge Wk # 14: The Great Design
Rap Challenge Wk # 15: How Can You Miss 'Em?
Rap Challenge Wk # 16: Due Diligence
Hip Hop MC Challenge # 1: "Imprisoned In Your Mind?
Thank you for reading & listening to this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.
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Next Post coming tomorrow
Yes seems like you are really very passionate. Nice Lyric :)
Keep it up!
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words. I was pretty tired, but just finished writing that verse and had to support the community, especially since there haven't been so many entries. Some of the most creative lyrics come at your lowest energy points. There is always another level to reach but of course, Thank you again for listening and your support, I indeed shall keep it up. Feel free to check out my other rap entries, and songs on my profile.
Yes I followed you and will check them out.
But anyhow when you start writing you cant stop. Every verse will bring the next one.
You are completely right, I pretty much write nonstop everyday lol
Thank you for your support, hope you find more songs of mine that you enjoy
i like your video.
but I do not know what it means, because I am from Indonesia
Thank you very much, which language do you speak in Indonesia?
Indonesian language as well.
try your translate
Okay I did research on Google and learned there are many different dialects of the Indonesian language
I always put my song lyrics in my posts when I share a video of me performing music
You can always try and translate my lyrics into google into your Indonesian language to help you understand what I am singing or rapping about
yes thank you very much my friend
You're welcome
Please visit to my blog to
Hey bro! How are you? It's been while since the last time we talk!
I will listen to your new video right now,lucky i bring my headphone. :)
Hey bro, I am doing good, thanks for asking,
Yeah life goes by fast, I am finally having more time out of the day to get caught up with projects, I hope you liked the new video
How are you and everything? Hope it is all well and you're in good health and your mom too
God bless
Yes bro,time gone by so fast. Im fine bro,my mom is in good health now bro..need to maintain the medicine..thank you so much bro!
GOD BLESS..
That is wonderful to hear. God is indeed great, what a blessing. You are most welcome.
Indeed bro! Thank you so much for your support bro!
You're very welcome bro
😁😁
Fire!!! ( sick beat 2!!! U say 'genesis7'??)
yeah bro, thank you very much! youtube or google search him
genesis7productions.com also for his beats
Here is another one of Genesis7's beats
check this one out by me and my best friend @edgarstudio
he sings, I rap
https://steemit.com/originalmusic/@verbal-d/m-m-m-28-the-official-song-release-of-cherish-and-completing-international-collaborations-original-song-blog
"..I embody music, can't mute it, my soul's blaring
My music gives you all of me, I’m that passionate
I always stay driven, if I drift, I’m not crashing it.."
I can pretty much relate to those lines...love it. Love the entire vibe, from the beat and them cool jazzy chords all the way to your lyrics, flow and deliverance. Dope as usual B.
Thank you bro, I can definitely see your passion and the soulful artwork you put out.
Glad to put it out there bro, and that brothers like you can appreciate the message I embed within my music.
Much love bro