Steemit Open Mic Wk # 73 Unofficial Judge's Entry: "Stop Bullying" (Original Song)

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This is a song topic near and dear to my heart, I share with you a deep and personal perspective and experience, I hope you can enjoy it for what it's worth.


Beat "It's Your World" Produced By J Dilla

@Verbal-D
Verse 1:
Bullying comes in many forms, as fallen rain amounts in storms
The heavy words, the violent pain, memories dark, the brain it swarms
Humiliated, devastated, makes you wish you weren't born
Truly jaded, hella hatred, broken pieces, heart is torn...

Some just want to live their life, never wanting part in strife
Beaten up from day to night, and never taught to face and fight
Their self esteem will truly drop, like tear drops as body drops
So finished, light's diminished, thinking that their life's a menace...

I was bullied and abused, then would bully and abuse
Vicious circle, eyes purple, black and blue, and shorter fuse
Truly didn't understand, clenching fists, misusing hands
All I wanted was the love, but inner hatred had had my plans...

Was just a preteen, felt like they using creatine
Trying to knock my head off, a heavy elbow, and a guillotine
Was jumped and so depressed, over slumped, done and mo' oppressed
But found my inner strength, my music puts it to the test..


Song Lyrics Copyrighted By Verbal D


If you missed my other previous Melodious Music Memoirs, including Open Mic Contest Wk Entries, Please click on the provided links below:


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great rapping ,,,,your style of rapping is really good em just listening this again and again i never listened much rapping before ,but thats cool :) keep it up !

You are very kind @abeera, so glad you like it so much to repeat it :) what a great compliment, I definitely shall keep it up. Many many thanks.

Oh wow looks so good!! ThanksS

O great verbal-d been waiting on your judges list for ever, you no longer a judge, am a cry bro. 😋😋😋..

i am usually one of the last judges, me and @krystle because we have younger children. I put a lot of time into my posts so I need complete focus, lol when the children are sleeping I zone in. I am working on the post right now. The list is coming lol I am definitely Still a judge! don't worry Thanks for your patience

Blessings, I never knew shout out to your hard work and time devoted to the open mic community. @verbal-d @krystle

God bless you as well, thanks for the acknowledgement and kind appreciation, it is a privilege and honor to do what we provide for the community to help it grow and strengthen. The list will be out when it's out lol I go as fast as I can, but not too fast to where I crash into the floor.

Hi at verbal-d, been looking an eye for your weekly list from openmic. Should we expect your list today?

yes sorry it is on its way i am working on it as we speak lol

I feel sooo silly for saying this but i never knew you were a rapper verbal-d.. but that was some really good stuff... very real stuff in the message of the your tracks, maybe i'll do a song with a rap my next week's openmic. but again i must say.. your'e great!!

Thanks for checking out this song I appreciate it. I feel I need to promote this song more "The Official Steemit Song"

This song I created was the song that inspired @luzcypher to create the Steemit Open Mic Contest when he heard me rapping and singing when I first joined Steemit over a year and a half ago. Check it out, and read the lyrics for some fun word play, I hope you enjoy this one as well, I appreciate your kind words and you taking time out to listen and comment. I love the art of hip hop, definitely a passion of mine for over a decade and a half
here is the link to the song

https://steemit.com/music/@papa-pepper/verbal-d-s-the-official-steemit-song-featuring-edgarstudio-and-papa-pepper-music-video

just saw it man, sick!!! you're actually finished goods, like you're an artist man... Talk about word play and rhyme schemes man... i've never done an original song on openmic but i'm definitely going to start working on one now..It's obvious i've been playing..

Thank you bro, this was a fun flow with an important subject matter that I wanted to tackle and express. Rhymes and word play are something I love to use to express my thoughts. I look forward to hearing your original music.

This was doppppee. Great delivery my man!

Thank you very much bro for the love and support. I knew you might vibe to this one. We can't go wrong when we use a J Dilla beat! I wanna reuse this beat for something else as well lol Thanks again for lending your ear and dropping feedback

Just perfect.. wow :

Thanks appreciate that.

D! This is some dope flow bro!

Loving the lyrics.

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Thank you so much bro, So glad you enjoyed this one, when I am able to focus and put my passion to the highest level, I am able to switch gears and pick up the pace. This was definitely a challenging rhythmic verse to flow but I did it :)

Killing it brother... As I was listening and attempting some lines I could not help to get stuck.. I guess a couple of them are a bit of a tongue twister...

Thank you very much for the love bro and for listening, yeah some are rhythmically challenging, the way I like it to put myself to the test, I still had to work around some words and do some rearranging but I am happy with how it all turned out.

Damn!! Yea this was some fire, you destroy those lyrics you wrote!! Way to be!!

Thanks so much for the blessing of your words and I am glad you enjoyed this one bro. I really felt compelled to put something profound and raw on this one.

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