Steemit Open Mic Night Week 42 Entry: Baby When I See You Part 3 (Original Song)

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)


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This song has been requested of me to be written by fellow Steemian @justhope, and I gladly accepted her "SteemitGig" as I have had experience writing songs for many different musicians, singers, and rappers alike, from composing instrumentals to entire songs with harmonies. If you would like for me to write you a song for STEEM, please comment below or direct message me in Steemit.chat to @verbal-d. This was truly a sad and emotionally evoking piece but I believe it came out beautifully and @justhope absolutely loves singing it, so that makes me happy that she enjoys the newest creation. Hope you enjoy it as well. I will officially release this song later on in the next few weeks or so, hopefully sooner than later.

Full Song Lyrics and Due Credits provided below.


Song's Due Credits


Beat Produced by Verbal D


Chorus Written, Created & Performed by Verbal D


Verses 1 & 2 Written, Created & Performed by Verbal D


Full Song Lyrics


Verbal D
Chorus:
Chorus:
I can’t believe it’s true
Baby when I see you
I’m giving my love to you
There’s nothing more I need, no
‘Cause when I see you
You bring out the best in me

Verse 1:
So many times I’ve lost my way
Falling down many yesterdays

And I don’t know
I don’t know how long that I’ve prayed
But I’m barely keeping my problems at bay

That’s why I need you
Oh God, I need you
There’s so much broken in my life
It’s hard to make it through

I didn’t ask for all this darkness
Feel the pain, so cold and heartless
I’ve had more than enough
I’ll try not to give up

Chorus:
I can’t believe it’s true
Baby when I see you
I’m giving my love to you
There’s nothing more I need, no
‘Cause when I see you
You bring out the best in me

Verse 2:
I reminisce on a hundred flowers
I think of the moment they wilted downward
And all their beauty, all their beauty’s lost to death
All alone until their final breath

I know that is not how I want to go
I’ve been holding on for too long to hope
And I know I’m not promised tomorrow
Only your presence can heal my sorrow…

Chorus:
I can’t believe it’s true
Baby when I see you
I’m giving my love to you
There’s nothing more I need, no
‘Cause when I see you
You bring out the best in me
So why did you leave?...

Song Lyrics Copyrighted by Verbal D


If you missed my other previous Melodious Music Memoirs, including Open Mic Contest Wk Entries, Please click on the provided links below:

Melodious Music Memoirs # 1: Change The World
Melodious Music Memoirs # 2: Impact
Melodious Music Memoirs # 3: My Mother
THE STEEMIT SONG
Melodious Music Memoirs # 4: Statements


Melodious Music Memoirs # 5: Love, Passion, Passion, Love
Melodious Music Memoirs # 6: Nothing But Bliss - Open Mic Night Contest Wk 2 Entry
Melodious Music Memoirs # 7: The Bitcoin Song - Open Mic Night Contest Wk 3 Entry
Melodious Music Memoirs # 8: Vacay - Open Mic Night Contest Wk 4 Entry
Open Mic Night Wk 5 Entry: Grim Is Out Stretching Death Fields


Melodious Music Memoirs # 9: When Darkness Falls
Open Mic Night Wk 6 Entry: Amnesia
Open Mic Night Wk 7 Entry: Last Day
Open Mic Night Wk 8 Entry: Spaceman Jones
Open Mic Night Wk 9 Entry: Somehow


Melodious Music Memoirs # 10: Structural Adaptation Acoustic and Oriental Versions
Melodious Music Memoirs # 11: All Dogs Go To Heaven - R.I.P. Bear
Melodious Music Memoirs # 12: Epic Arena
Melodious Music Memoirs # 13: Fast Lane
Open Mic Night Wk 10 Entry: End Of My Season


Melodious Music Memoirs # 14: Industrial Flames All Fired Up
Open Mic Night Wk 11 Entry: Get With The BlockChain
Melodious Music Memoirs # 15: Shattered Rainbows, Broken Skies
Melodious Music Memoirs # 16: Whip
THE BIGFOOT SONG


Melodious Music Memoirs # 17: Romance & Bliss
Open Mic Night Wk 12 Entry: Crime Lord
Melodious Music Memoirs # 18: Do You See What Chia Seeds?
Open Mic Night Wk 13 Entry: Dad, I Believe That's Love
Open Mic Night Wk 14 Entry: Barz


Melodious Music Memoirs # 19: Recuperation, Rejuvenation
Melodious Music Memoirs # 20: Wisdom Of The Ancients
Open Mic Night Wk 15 Entry: M.A.S.H. Theme
Open Mic Night Wk 16 Entry: Lass Gehn, Let's Go!
Melodious Music Memoirs # 21: It's Hard To Trust But To Love… I Must


Open Mic Night Wk 17 Entry: What Could Go Wrong?
Melodious Music Memoirs # 22: Summer Gladness
Melodious Music Memoirs # 23: The Marvellous Matriarch
Melodious Music Memoirs # 24: The Cool Cats On Steemit
@Soundlegion's SuperNova Steemit Producer Challenge Entry


Open Mic Night Wk # 18 Entry: Your Dreams
Open Mic Night Wk 19 Entry: The Flute Of Fools
Melodious Music Memoirs # 25: On The Ball
Open Mic Night Wk 20 Entry: Sea Of Love
Open Mic Night Wk 21 Entry: No Defeat


Melodious Music Memoirs # 26: Ethereal Presence
Open Mic Night Wk 22 Entry: Eye Contact
Open Mic Night Wk 23 Entry: PizzaGate
Melodious Music Memoirs # 27: Shadow Man-Dala
Open Mic Night Wk 24 Entry: Cherish


Melodious Music Memoirs # 28: Official Song Release Of "Cherish"
Open Mic Night Wk 25 Entry: I'mma Be A Father AKA "Harmony's Song"
Melodious Music Memoirs # 29: Sliver's Edge Of Ledd's Silver Lining
Open Mic Night Wk 26 Entry: Soulmates
Open Mic Night Wk 27 Entry: Beyond Words


Melodious Music Memoirs # 30: Beyond The Veil
Open Mic Night Wk 28 Entry: Waves
Open Mic Night Wk 29 Entry: The Echoes Of One Who Pondered
Open Mic Night Wk 30 Entry: God Gave Me A Solid Vision
Melodious Music Memoirs # 31: Ingrained


Open Mic Night Wk 31 Entry: Warning To The devil, Message To The People
Open Mic Night Wk 32 Entry: Thank God, I'm No Island
Open Mic Night Wk 33 Entry: Haven
Open Mic Night Wk 34 Entry: God's Cityzen
Melodious Music Memoirs # 32: POWER SPIRIT


Open Mic Night Wk 35 Entry: Silent Whispers
Melodious Music Memoirs # 33: Here & Now
Melodious Music Memoirs # 34: Life Stands Still
Open Mic Night Wk 36 Entry: Live Life Today
Open Mic Night Wk 37 Entry: Where We Are


Melodious Music Memoirs # 35: Official Song Release Of "Where We Are"
Melodious Music Memoirs # 36: Official Song Release Of "Dad, I Believe That's Love"
Melodious Music Memoirs # 37: Tangled Webs We Weave
Rap Challenge Wk # 2: Role Model First, Emcee Second
Open Mic Night Wk 38 Entry: Jesus


Melodious Music Memoirs # 38: Official Song Release Of "Jesus"
Melodious Music Memoirs # 39: Bird On A Wing
Melodious Music Memoirs # 40: Official Song Release Of "Thank God, I'm No Island"
Open Mic Night Wk 39 Entry: RIP Prodigy Of Mobb Deep
Rap Challenge Wk # 4: Bringer Of Life


Open Mic Night Wk 40 Entry: RIP DJOfficial
Melodious Music Memoirs # 41: Official Song Release Of "RIP Prodigy Of Mobb Deep"
Melodious Music Memoirs # 42: Reflections Of A Blessing
Rap Challenge Wk # 5: Deep, Lingering Pain
Open Mic Night Wk 41 Entry: Queen


Melodious Music Memoirs # 43: Official Song Release Of "Queen"
Rap Challenge Wk # 6: A Gorge Of Love In A Valley Of Hate





Thank you for reading & listening to this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.


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Wowwww, friendddddd, it's so amazing to hear you singing this song. It's so beautiful for you 😊

Thank you my friend, I really appreciate your nice comment. I know you sing it beautifully as well. I messaged you in steemit.chat just now, please reply back when you can.


This post got a 5.01 % upvote thanks to @verbal-d - Hail Eris !

Gogo Verbal :).

I like your originals

Thank you very much, I am happy you enjoy them. I have many more to share with you, thanks for listening.

Awesome @verbal-d. Love it, man.

Thanks so much bro, I can't wait to release the professional version of this one, I'll let you know when I do, appreciate you checking this out.

Beautiful sweet song thank you for sharing it with us... your voice is very good

Thank you for listening my friend, you are most welcome, today was a good day with my voice, I was well warmed up :)

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