@Rondonson's Rap Challenge # 16: My Entry - "Due Diligence" Part 3 (Original Song)
I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.
Verse 1:
Life is crazy, you're not tryna hear our struggle bars
Too vicious if unleashed, getting muzzled hard
Rottweilers at the front of our junkyards
Subconsciousness is guarding scattered memories we tugged apart...
No entry is allowed, so if you're trespassing
Some'll end up on the news, due to death, passing
Elites love us when we die; we ingest habits
Bodies on the streets are speed bumps, but there's less traffic...
The hate is real from the fakes that create facades
Ready to react like an act that awaits applaud
Thinking that they're slick, yet they twitch giving clever nods
I make 'em cringe with jaw unhinged mentioning my God
This world disowns me, impressed by their possessions
Possessed by their oppressions still obsessed with their succession
I test the spirits, their intentions never in a session
Protected from the weapons formed against me, Christ reflection...
Song Lyrics Copyrighted By @Verbal-D
If you missed my other previous Rap Challenge Wk & Hip Hop MC Challenge Entries, Please click on the provided links below:
Rap Challenge Wk # 2: Role Model First, Emcee Second
Rap Challenge Wk # 4: Bringer Of Life
Rap Challenge Wk # 5: Deep, Lingering Pain
Rap Challenge Wk # 6: A Gorge Of Love In A Valley Of Hate
Rap Challenge Wk # 7: Steemit Hip Hop Community
Rap Challenge Wk # 8: Everybody Wants To Be An Original
Rap Challenge Wk # 14: The Great Design
Rap Challenge Wk # 15: How Can You Miss 'Em?
Hip Hop MC Challenge # 1: "Imprisoned In Your Mind?
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Dope flow!! Especially liked the part in the middle
"Elites love us when we die; we ingest habits
Bodies on the streets are speed bumps, but there's less traffic" (Nice to see a semicolon there as well) Peace!
Thank you for this dope comment bro
I am glad you enjoyed this one
It was really fun to write up and perform
And I'm happy you noticed the detail on the semicolon
I am an English graduate, so I try to keep my grammar and punctuation on point
Even when I resort to a bit of slang and other reference points in my verses
Peace & Steem On
Yo you slaying it B. Love everything about it. Werd.
Haha appreciate you to the fullest my brother, this weekend is our time!
Be readyyyyyyy
Many thanks bro, you know I'm not giving up at all, or letting up any pressure
I hear you. Art is in Heart and Earth included, pressure is nowhere to be found. (; Cheers ☺
Your patience is something profound lol thanks bro
Nice. Real rap.
I appreciate that, thank you for listening
good
I appreciate your comment, thank you for listening
Dope flow and sick lyrics dog. Upvoted and followed! 👍
Thank you very much bro, I appreciate your support and follow and you listening, feel free to check out my other entries in the links provided below on the post in blue, would love to hear more feedback. Many thanks
Checked out your other entries as well as your work on Soundcloud and followed you there too. What stands out to me is that you write clean lyrics sort of the way I do. It takes some extra work to write when you don't use explicit language.
I appreciate you following me on Soundcloud and giving my other tracks a listen, I have multiple accounts on Soundcloud since I ran up the memory space lol I would love to check out your music
I think you know where I am coming from with positive inspiring music that makes a difference and wakens different perspectives on many important topics of life
I used to use explicit language when I was much younger, but I actually find it to be a hindrance which blocks or distorts what I really want to say, I find it easier to write without cursing or hexing anyone, and it's been many years since doing so, so now this kind of writing is second nature.
Well done @verbal-d... you just made another hit 🎶
Thank you very much for your nice comment I appreciate your support always, glad you enjoyed this one
Wow! You are the Man! Great lyrics.
Thank you very much bro, I appreciate your kind words, I give the very best and glad to make an impact.
You stay with a fia flow yo.
I appreciate your super kind comment bro, not trying to burn anyone in the process, but instead with this fire, light a path for others
Friend, so emotional and real. You have a road to everyone's heart andd it's amazing!! Well done!!!:)
Thank you very much my friend, I appreciate your deep words, we must always try and make a difference and be an influence with our passions that we share and affect the world with.
Dope, came through to show some love and resteem.
I appreciate you reaching out bro, thank you for showing love and support, that is humbling coming from another talented emcee as yourself