Wild West - Chapter 8 - Part 1 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

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Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3
Chapter 4

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Chapter 5

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Chapter 6

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22

Chapter 7

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7

Chapter 8

Part 1


Tom and James were shaken awake from the deepest sleep they have ever had in their lives. They had no intention of getting up. Their muscles were sore and both suffered terrible back pain, but they had no choice. Jimmy and two of his brothers were shouting at them to get up and join them at the nearby lake to clean themselves and have some leisure time before work. They objected as much as humanly possible, but after they were already wide awake from the arguing there was no use of trying any further.

They got up and put their shoes on, and followed the others outside, still half asleep. Supposedly they have only slept for seven hours, or at least so Jimmy said. By the time they've somewhat regained themselves they were already at the lakeside and everyone was already taking their clothes off, running towards the body of water for a swim.

The moment they jumped into the lake and the water woke them up completely, they were happy they got up and didn't sleep for their entire free time. It was of just the right temperature not to be cold, but to wake one up. It did wonders to help and relax their exhausted and aching bodies.


Disclaimer: The full story is in its unfinished state. All content is tentative to change.

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The prompt was:

"Back pain"


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Previous writing prompts I have fulfilled:

Brutal
Funny/Misc
Happy ending
Gross
#1 - Living off the grid
#3 - A young thief
#8 - A traitor from hell
#9 - Not alone
#10 - Millitary testing grounds
#13 - Bigfoot
#14 - And angel in love with a whore
#15 - Down the rabbit hole
#18 - Reborn as a 10 year old
#19 - A struggling door to door salesman
#24 - Rebellious talking food
#26 - Ssssnails!
#28 - Mission Erased
#32 - Dog's breath
#38 - Abducted
#42 - Killer clowns
#43 - A penny
#44 - Fear
#2 - A dolphin tea party
#4 - Stained hands
#7 - The giant depressed onion
#21 - The red star
#25 - Long-distance Relationship
#27 - A dream
#30 - Potato
#31 - Dragons
#33 - The Jungle
#35 - A life lesson
#36 - Unicorn meat
#39 - The Purple Road
#40 - Immortal Store Clerk
#41 - Artemis' Hell
#46 - A scientist's journal
#47 - One of many


#5 - The homeless man
#6 - A blind date
#11 - The wealthy man
#12 - Happy ending
#16 - Asshole soulmate
#17 - My bunny Fluffy
#20 - War veteran
#22 - Wishing to meet a villain
#23 - School trip
#45 - Crafted armor









#29 - Green Chewing Gum
#34 - Turkey Trauma
#37 - Stuck in a loop


















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Five minute freewrite challenges I have fulfilled:

Fire, Toilet, Flash, Soft feet, Pillow, Grounding, Surprise, Ending the pain, Going for a walk, Car Mechanic, Murderer, Dog hair, Ducks, Untested medicine, Forbidden love, Vacation, Awakening, Dentist, Wild west.


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Does the lake have any fish in it? If so, are they Fishnick's fish and considered off limits?

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Hmmm. Good question.
But since Fishnick is dead....... you know~~~

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