Wild West - Part 20 - 5 minute freewrite challenge
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Wild West - Part 20
They were laughing for a moment - the two hardboiled minds - then James came onto another idea.
“You know what? We don’t even have to risk killing Fishnick. The moment we step foot under that dome we’re safe from Ducköden. Holy shit. That patch of land is our salvation all by itself.”
“I’ll drink to that!” Tom began pouring a new round of whiskey for them, but stopped after having filled the first glass. “Wait… Won’t Ducköden know we’re not planning on killing Fishnick?”
Tom’s words made James realize they both got carried away.
“Oh, shit. Yeah. He’ll know. In fact, I’m sure He already does. He’s probably listening to us talk this very moment.” James’ voice had changed and now sounded defeated, instead of excited and proud. “You don’t know Ducköden, not the way I do,” James emptied the glass Tom had filled with whiskey. “He knows us better than we know ourselves. He must’ve had this meeting of ours planned all along. He knows what we’ll do already, and had known for quite some time, while even we ourselves don’t know yet. He analyses and plans everything. He knows everything. He already knows we will kill Fishnick for him. He wouldn’t have brought it up otherwise. He already knows what will happen. It’s us who still need to find out. Fuck!” He slammed his fist down on the table.
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free writes are addicting at times ,
Sure are :D But it's the good kind of addiction. :D
At least I hope
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That Ducköden has such a big power...but sometimes being hardboiled minds can help to defeat the subtlety with the stubbornness
What did you feed monday that it became little? :P
He is God's offspring after all :P We'll see who "wins", and how. :p All in due time. :D
Thanks! :D I'm on it! ^^
I need to keep notes to where I left off.................
going back to find my place...........
I love reading this in more than one installment :D
So happy to hear that! :D
And I believe so, yeah... Reading the daily one is just enough to get you ibterested... And then you need to wait again. Haha :D
The more I know about the duck monster - the more I don't like him. The gunslingers are getting to be more human :)
I might make you like Him again...
Or I might not. ;P
Yepp! :D I like that also! :D It's partly because He took their powers away, partly because they are related and partly because tjey are together in this mess haha :D no use in being "macho" now :p
Very good, I could spend 24 hours reading you without getting bored, very original
Thanks! Means very very much to me!
There's plenty of my stories if you ever get bored ^^
And more to come, of course ^^