[Short Story] - Wild West - Part 10 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

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Wild West - Part 10


“The mother?” James continued.

“A fine lady who can take care of herself. Much like Rosanne. In case you’re wondering, last I’ve seen Rosanne she was doing good,” Tom wasn’t sure whether James wanted any more detail about Rosanne, so he paused and waited for James’ response. She was his mother and James’ wife which he had left 29 years ago when Tom was born.

James grunted, but didn’t comment, then got up from the chair and walked over to the counter.

“Whiskey?”

Tom nodded.

“I know you have many questions, Tom, but it is best you find out the answers for yourself,” said James while pouring a double whiskey for both, then continued after a brief pause. “See that board behind you?”

“Is that your next target?”

“Our. Our next target, Tom. ” James placed the two glasses of whiskey on the table and sat down.

“Is now the time you tell me about Him?”

“Tell you? No. You will see for yourself. He is arriving any minute now.”

James raised his glass and Tom followed suit.

“Here’s to our first job together.”

They raised their glasses at each other, then both chugged their drinks, slamming the empty glasses back onto the table.

Link to part 11


The prompt was:

"Board"


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If you enjoy writing yourself, I am hosting a constrained writing contest, where each week I limit your writing with various rules and force you to be creative in brand new ways! If you're not a writer yourself, check it out and see what others have come up with! :D


I turn your writing prompts into stories.

Previous writing prompts I have fulfilled:

Brutal
Funny/Misc
Happy ending
Gross
#1 - Living off the grid
#3 - A young thief
#8 - A traitor from hell
#9 - Not alone
#10 - Millitary testing grounds
#13 - Bigfoot
#14 - And angel in love with a whore
#15 - Down the rabbit hole
#18 - Reborn as a 10 year old
#19 - A struggling door to door salesman
#24 - Rebellious talking food
#26 - Ssssnails!
#28 - Mission Erased
#32 - Dog's breath
#38 - Abducted
#2 - A dolphin tea party
#4 - Stained hands
#7 - The giant depressed onion
#21 - The red star
#25 - Long-distance Relationship
#27 - A dream
#30 - Potato
#31 - Dragons
#33 - The Jungle
#35 - A life lesson
#36 - Unicorn meat







#5 - The homeless man
#6 - A blind date
#11 - The wealthy man
#12 - Happy ending
#16 - Asshole soulmate
#17 - My bunny Fluffy
#20 - War veteran
#22 - Wishing to meet a villain
#23 - School trip







#29 - Green Chewing Gum
#34 - Turkey Trauma
#37 - Stuck in a loop















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Five minute freewrite challenges I have fulfilled:

Fire, Toilet, Flash, Soft feet, Pillow, Grounding, Surprise, Ending the pain, Going for a walk, Car Mechanic, Murderer, Dog hair, Ducks, Untested medicine, Forbidden love, Vacation, Awakening, Dentist, Wild west.

Next writing prompt to be fulfilled:

"Purple road"
Provided by @bhop42moro


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after I set out all the links I'm coming back to get caught up :D

Today I am the delivery of links puppet. While 3/4th sleep I cannot be witty. ❀ Here is today's prompt!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-91-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-earthquakepet

Sounds like a deal to me! ;P

Oh and, while you're at it, though I might be too late... The link you're providing is broken :<

:D Right click on the photo and open in new tab. Use the link for posting if you want :D

That's a cool gif! :D Now just need to come up with something that I can use it with :p
You guys~... forcing me to write! hahah :p

I'm going to try over the next couple of day to post all the revised photos of everyone that is now in the #steemhouse.

I must NOT miss this! :D Will keep an eye out for your posts :D

Thank YOU!! here is the correct link!! It got messed up 1/2 through lol now off to read your story and get caught up :D

Today I am the delivery of links puppet. While 3/4th asleep I cannot be witty. ❀ Here is today's prompt!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-91-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-earthquake

Ohhhhhhhhhh You have OUT done yourself!!! I could not click fast enough :D Bravo!!

Thanks you! :D Means a lot lot lot :D

I noted you always end with a little cliffhanger. This is a very good writing thecnique retain loyal readers ;)

I do indeed try my best to keep you on your tippy toes :P
It's a technique that makes readers both hate and love you at the same time, I believe :p
Hopefully one outweighs the other. :3

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