Wild West - Chapter 6 - Part 9 - 5 minute freewrite challenge
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Chapter 1
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Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 4
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Chapter 5
Chapter 6
The boy hesitated to answer at first, but then realized it was a potential opportunity to make some money. “I’ll talk to my father and brothers, but for 7 ribes a night I’m sure we can take you.”
The two were appalled about the price being only a single ribe cheaper than the hotel, but they both knew they could use the potential information they could get from him and his family, so they both nodded in agreement. They didn’t intend to work for long anyway.
“Great. I’m Jimmy, by the way.” They shook hands. “It’s a little crowded already, so you’ll have to sleep on the floor, but the food is better than the hotel’s. The Pritta she makes is out of this world! You’ll see! You’ll see!” His eyes glowed bright and his mouth visibly salivated.
“Pritta? Don’t tell me it’s that weird cabbage soup we got fed today.” Tom jerked with the memory of the morning broth’s taste.
“No. Chicken tenders cooked on low heat for eight hours and smothered in a red wine sauce. Marvelous.” Jimmy had to swallow at that point not to drown in his own saliva.
“Red wine minus the meat and cooking sounds just fine to me.” James remarked and they all chuckled.
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"Red Wine"
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I like Jimmy, he keeps his eye out for opportunity. ;) Poor James, he just wants a drink, how long are you planning on making him wait?
Yepp! A true business
mankid.Hmmm. You're right. He might just start a distillery on his own. :P