Wild West - Chapter 2 - Part 16 - 5 minute freewrite challenge
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Chapter 1
If you wish to read the unedited freewrite versions of chapter 1, start reading by clicking here.
Chapter 2
The two gunslingers were both riding their fastest, but there was no real knowing who was in the lead. One moment James was an inch in front of Tom, then in the next Tom took the lead by an inch. In such a manner they rode side by side for at least 50 miles, until both horses got tired and slowed down tremendously, eventually coming to a clumsy walk.
“Safe to say the horses are equal. We, however, are not,” James mocked Tom as he had to fix his Stetson.
“Ha-ha,” he gave him a dead serious look from under his hat.
“Look on the bright side, kid. At least you didn’t lose it,” James was enjoying himself. The two were very competitive by nature, and James wouldn’t let his victory run silent. “You’d be risking a damn serious sunburn then. Unless you’d wear your underwear on your head instead,” James laughed out loud again.
“Is it really so important to you that you won? You want me to say that you’re better, don’t you?” Tom tried to make himself the victim, but they both knew had the situation been reversed, Tom would also have made a big deal out of his victory. “Fine. You’re better.”
“Now, now, that doesn’t count. Say it like you mean it. Look me in the eye and say it.” James was enjoying himself a little too much.
"Sunburn"
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Fire, Toilet, Flash, Soft feet, Pillow, Grounding, Surprise, Ending the pain, Going for a walk, Car Mechanic, Murderer, Dog hair, Ducks, Untested medicine, Forbidden love, Vacation, Awakening, Dentist, Wild west.
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again............I don't have a clue how you do it and make it flow seamlessly from one to the other!!!!!!!!! I'm in AWE of you and your ability!!!
BRAVO!! and a
Thank you thank you thank you! So very much! blushes
I'm actually compiling and editing Chapter 1 to give it a nice stand-alone post as we speak! :D I'm about half-way done so it should be ready to post sometime tomorrow ^^ Only don't know how to make an active link at the bottom of it to "Chapter 2" as Chapter 2 isn't completed yet.... I might include a link identical to the one Chapter 2 will have once it gets published... And hope that works. :p
Yeah a good testosterone horse-ride!
In this ancient martial art temple, the freewrite hombu-dojo, the great soke @mariannewest put me, her sempai, in charge of communicating the powerful moves on which we will train for becoming BBB (bananafish-black-belt):
Martial art technique n. 1, single prompt option
Martial art technique n. 2, three parts freewrite: 1 2 3
BBB :o I WANNA <3
The saga continues, hehe :) Another cool chapter!
Thanks! :D Very happy to hear you liked it! :D
A penny.
Added, and will be done when I find time :D
Good writing, I love to see where everyone's creativity takes them!
Very happy to hear you liked it! :D
Yeah, it's pretty awesome to see how minds of different people work - and what they come up with! :D
Ha! The line "say it like you mean it" has been used a bit in my life. Love James' sense of humor!