Wild West - Chapter 3 - Part 13 - 5 minute freewrite challenge
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Chapter 1
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
Jax realized that whatever Tom and James were up to couldn’t be a big threat to anyone under the dome – after all, their data was outdated as they believed Fishnick was still in charge. With that in mind Jax concluded to let the two go even without knowing their true intentions. “Alright, I had my fun, and you’re obviously not telling me anything no matter how hard I try. For your sake I hope you aren’t some outside scouts, … because you’re damn sure not getting out of here alive. Anyway, I’ll pass you on to my brother Crax in Ätherock. He’ll know what to do with you two. Hey!” Jax waved to the group of four guards surrounding the gunslinger’s horses. “Shoot the horses and take these two to my brother in Ätherock.”
Moments after Jax gave the order two shots were fired simultaneously – straight into the horses’ heads, killing them instantly. James’ face turned into a frown and he looked toward the floor. He felt sorry for Magnum and Jaguar.
The four guards then lined up behind James’ back and awaited Jax’s orders.
“Oh, and, I’ll be taking that.” Jax reached for James’ revolver and pulled it out of its holster – then crouched down to Tom and took his gun also. “Alright, load that guy into the carriage and make this one walk," Jax smiled.
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Wait, the end seemed a pity to me about the horses. Maybe the boys would reveal the truth once they meet Mr.Atherock.
Oh, maybe it isn't obvious yet... Ätherock is meant to be a town located under the dome. :D Not a person :P
They're seeing Crax in Ätherock :P
About the horses... well... They're stubborn creatures bound to their masters... so they're of no use to Jax or anyone else. Best to just get rid of them then and there.
I'm sorry I overlooked the preposition 'in'. Btw thanks for the explanation :P
Not a problem! :D Glad you read it! ;D
Hope you embark on the entire journes someday :p
2 chapters are written so far :p
What a badass story you've got going there, @svashta, nice job ;)
Anyway,I'm in charge of delivering the latest prompt, so here ya go:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-159-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-think