Lift Off - Day 82
10-9-8
Immersion
Liquid warmth welcomes you with open arms
Incrementally smoothing out life’s knot’s
Gently coaxing you into the calm
-relax
-let go
-trust
7-6-5
Surrender
Slow deep breaths from the center of your qi
I-n-h-a-l-e /E-x-h-a-l-e
Silently floating in a watery exchange of energies
-cleansing
-reviving
-imbuing
4-3-2
Cognizant
Eyes close and senses engaged
Listening to the sound of silence
Breathing the aroma of life
-initiation
-activation
-reignition
1
LIFT OFF
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Previous posts for this challenge
Day 1: The Pendulum
Day 2: Half In - Half Out
Day 3: Names Will Always Hurt Me
Day 4: Turning
Day 5: No Longer
Day 6: Equilibrium
Day 7: Entangled
Day 8: Shattered
Day 12:Beat Ball WINNING ENTRY! (Intermediate category)
Day 15: The Golden Rule
Day 16: Panic
Day 19: Birthday
Day 20: Bar Room Blues
Day 21:Victory WINNING ENTRY!
Day 22: Just Another Day
Day 23: charming Knights
Day 24: Thank the Gods
Day 25:The Circle of Life WINNING ENTRY!
Day 26:Try Harder
Day 27:Up, Up and Away
Day 28: Grandchild
Day 30: Streams of Life
Day 33:Pep Talk
Day 34: First Steps
Day 35 Passengers
Day 36: Tools
Day 37:Spirit Fruit
Day 38: Perspective
Day 39:Divine Feminine
Day 40: Princess
Day 41: Trading
Day 42: Sky Gazer
Day 43: My Basement is Flooded
Day 44: When Two Spirits Meet
Day 46: Gems
Day 47: Bridges
Day 49: Layers
Day 50: Light
Day 52: Tula
Day 53: Silhouettes
Day 54: Point of vie
Day 55: Hope
Day 56: Feather
Day 57: At Least That’s What They Say
Day 58: Leaking
Day 61: Lift Your Head
Day 62: Make Way
Day 63: Congested
Day 64: Just Kick It
Day 65: Definition
Day 66: Transitions
Day 67: Ellen
Day 68 I Wonder
Day 69: Trinity
Day 70: Palette
Day 71: Daydreamer
Day 72: Call of the Wild
Day 73: Sanctuary
Day 74: Beyond the veil
Day 75: Fallen
Day 76: Marvels of Magic
Day 77: True Colors
Day 78: Ripplers
I really like the structure of this piece. I like the experimentation in it. I like the numbers, the single words in some lines, the downward movement, the ending of the culminating capitalization, and the little dashes that mark words with feeling and emphasis. Great job. This is going to be my poem pick for the week. 😎
It is really a sublime experience to be guided by the soft poetic voice that, from within, induces us to penetrate this exercise of relaxation and almost without realizing it, we put ourselves in control of that voice, breathing and elevating ourselves towards a full calm.
Excellent work, honey. A hug!
Nice dear...