First Steps - Day 34

in #poetry6 years ago

Inspired by a much better poem called Traveling Man Blues by @naquoya

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Life is a journey,
Marked by a series of first steps.
Each one starting and ending a trail:
May be just a passing blip on the radar,
Or a strong and steady heartbeat,
Or a feral and frenzied palpitation.

Some lead to nowhere.
If only we could backspace and delete,
But nothing is in vain

Others bring us back around,
As if we never left,
But now it seems a little easier.

Some run parallel.
Each path at first perpendicular, long or short,
Before turning towards the same direction.

Others make sharp right angles,
Changing our direction,
Never to return.

Some do a 360,
Traveling in circles for awhile
As we make up our minds.

Others do an about face,
To rest in the familiar
Or run from the unknown.

Some intersect another’s journey-
Walking side by side
As if their trails were one.

Others have tiny foot steps
Walking just behind;
Shielded for awhile.

Some are broad and easy.
Many have walked those paths
With nothing new to find.

Others are steep and narrow.
Undiscovered treasures
For those who dare to climb.

Some end way too soon!
And those they left behind,
Just stop and sink awhile.

Life is a journey,
Marked by a series of first steps,
Each one starting and ending a trail.
May be our last blip on this radar
Starts a new strong and steady beat
With its own feral and frenzied palpitations.

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Photo 1 by Liane Metzler on Unsplash
Photo 2 by Vector illustration

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Previous posts for this challenge
Day 1: The Pendulum
Day 2: Half In - Half Out
Day 3: Names Will Always Hurt Me
Day 4: Turning
Day 5: No Longer
Day 6: Equilibrium
Day 7: Entangled
Day 8: Shattered
Day 12:Beat Ball WINNING ENTRY! (Intermediate category)
Day 15: The Golden Rule
Day 16: Panic
Day 19: Birthday
Day 20: Bar Room Blues
Day 21:Victory WINNING ENTRY!
Day 22: Just Another Day
Day 23: charming Knights
Day 24: Thank the Gods
Day 25:The Circle of Life WINNING ENTRY!
Day 26:Try Harder
Day 27:Up, Up and Away
Day 28: Grandchild
Day 30: Streams of Life
Day 33:Pep Talk

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Thanks for the mention. Glad that I could inspire you with my own poem. I think you have written a worthy one of your own, with lots of lines that capture the essence of the journey that is life.

Beautiful, dear @firststeps. I like the lines:

The life is a trip,
marked by a series of first steps,
each beginning and ending a trail.

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