Ellen - Day 67

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Love you and miss you so much Mom.

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True grit
Mom to your siblings
At only thirteen
Raising your own
All on you own
Taking in strays
Both kids and pets
Worked achy fingers
Straight to the bone

True fun
Volleyball
Softball
Baseball too
Friday dinners
At greasy spoons
Followed by ice cream
Bitter ice tea sips
On hot lazy days
Hot chocolate waiting
After toboggan slides

True love
Caring for the Mom
That walked out on you
And even the man
That walked out on us
Working through pain
Just to bring joy
To lonely neglected
Elderly souls
Kicking our butts
So life didn’t have too
Many dreams sacrificed
To keep our dreams alive

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Day 4: Turning
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Day 8: Shattered
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Day 16: Panic
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Day 27:Up, Up and Away
Day 28: Grandchild
Day 30: Streams of Life
Day 33:Pep Talk
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Day 36: Tools
Day 37:Spirit Fruit
Day 38: Perspective
Day 39:Divine Feminine
Day 40: Princess
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Day 62: Make Way
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Day 66: Transitions

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Beautiful tribute to the mother. Your perspective paints us a strong woman who raised many children. There are details that I do not grasp because of cultural distance, but I enjoyed accompanying you through these memories that your head brought us embodied in beautiful words. Good job, honey.

This is my favorite poem of yours. I love the portrayal. I love the way you structured it and every word is pertinent. Great job. 😎

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