Entangled - Day 7
The first stanza of this poem was written as a comment to a contest sometime ago. But I decided to develop it further and added another stanza for this challenge. Hope you enjoy!
Drip, dropping tears send
Concentric, circular waves
Rippling outward
Across the watery depths
Colliding with others
Absorbing a portion
And reflecting empathy
Back to the center
Of souls that grieve
Splish splashing drops spread
Symmetric, spherical waves
Coursing outward
Bouncing on distant shores
Entangling with others
Assimilating vibes
Compiling its strength
Back to the center
Of joy filled souls
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Previous posts for this challenge
Day 1: The Pendulum
Day 2: Half In - Half Out
Day 3: Names Will Always Hurt Me
Day 4: Turning
Day 5: No Longer
Day 6: Equilibrium
Image credits
Photo 1 by qimono on Pixabay
Photo by Abbie Bernet on Unsplash
Definitely your poetic art fascinates me, @firststeps. Those images that you paint entangled seem dreamed, they are beautiful.
Thank you.
I love the sing-song feel and flow of this piece. Nicely constructed poem that feel like a complete thought.
:)
Very nice imagery . I like how the two stanzas are like yin & yang. And that it shows the effect our emotions have on others. just like me I can see you love nature.
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Thank you, and yes I love nature. Don’t worry about the value of your upvote. I appreciate the sentiment.
I bookmarked this page so that I can check out the poetry information later. I really like the photos and the poem!
your poem is very interesting @firststeps
(following my poetry gift for you) @firststeps
when tears speak
the heart began to pause
trapped by loud noise
out of silence
tears kept talking
seek the remaining justice
no sadness
there is nothing but nothingness
the lost goal
thank you for reading it
I'm glad if you want to see and read my poem on my blog, thanks @firststeps