Meandros de la luna- Meanders of the Moon- Original poem -100 days poetry challenge day 45

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 45, en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.


"La sabiduría de la Luna es mayor que la sabiduría de la Tierra, porque la Luna ve el universo más cerca que la Tierra."

Mehmet Murat

Meandros de la luna

Para quien no sepa de meandros,
la luna es una curvatura de mujer y no línea fiel
siguiendo los meandros de la carretera
y disfrutando del placer del trayecto en el mundo
por todo el horizonte nocturno,
al contrario del estilo solar
que establece un objetivo y lo pasa en línea dial.

Yo lo presentí, lo viví y lo recorro así...

Esta orientación hacia las fases
implica presencia en el cuerpo,
en el instante.
Una agudeza emocional y sensorial,
y una disponibilidad voluntaria
a seguir la experiencia corporal,
y espiritual
en lugar de simplemente escuchar el pensamiento.

Yo lo presentí, lo viví y lo recorro así...

La luna también implica acogimiento,
mientras, el sol es acción y reacción.
Hoy, nuestras percepciones psíquicas
y sensoriales están ocluidas
para defendernos contra la barbarie inducida.
Nos hemos vuelto medrosos y pusilánimes.
No nos entregamos.
Sólo la luna nos recibe
desde el llanto del planeta hasta el llanto del alma.

Yo lo presentí, lo viví y lo recorro así...

No es un fin, es una reapertura.
El consciente femenino nos sostiene
y nos viene impulsando
con la curva de una nueva era
en nuestro periplo humano.

Yo lo presentí, lo viví y lo recorro así...


Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 45, heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.


My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: M83-Wait


"The wisdom of the Moon is greater than the wisdom of the Earth, because the Moon sees the universe closer than the Earth."

Mehmet Murat

Meanders of the Moon

For those who do not know about meanders,
the moon is a woman's curvature and not a faithful line
following the meanders of the road
and enjoying the pleasure of the journey in the world
throughout the night horizon,
unlike the solar style
which establishes an objective and passes it on dial line.

I felt it, I lived it and I go through it like that...

This orientation towards the phases
it implies presence in the body,
In the instant.
An emotional and sensory acuity,
and a voluntary availability
to follow the bodily experience,
and spiritual
instead of just listening to the thought.

I felt it, I lived it and I go through it like that...

The moon also implies fostering,
while, the sun is action and reaction.
Today, our psychic perceptions
and sensory are occluded
to defend ourselves against induced barbarism.
We have become fearful and pusillanimous.
We do not deliver
Only the moon receives us
from the weeping of the planet to the weeping of the soul.

I felt it, I lived it and I go through it like that...

It is not an end, it is a reopening.
The female conscious holds us
and it has been driving us
with the curve of a new era
forward in our human journey

I felt it, I lived it and I go through it like that...



Original poem by @zeleiracordero

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Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest-day 7Ganador del día 7- Winner of the day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 /Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna - day 28Doble ganador: Día 28 y de la semana 4-double winner of the day 28 and of the week 4 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva Day29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30 / Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin- day 31 / Trenza - Braid-Day 32 / Ser poeta-Be a poet-Day 33 / Lluvia nocturna-Night rain .Day 34Ganador del día 34- Winner of the day 34 / Sueño turmalina azul-Dream bluish tourmaline-Day 35 / Resplandeciente zircón-Resplendent zircon-Day 36 /Luz de adentro-Light of inside-day 37 / Péndulo humano-Human pendulum -day 38 /Ópalo de fuego-Opal of fire- day 39 /Esta mujer el domingo-This woman on Sunday- day 40 / Sol naciente-Rising Sun- day 41Rojo carmesí - Crimson red- day 42 /Rosa guerrera- Rose of war- day 43 / Viento de arena - Sand wind - day 44


April 21, 2018


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"...the moon is a woman's curvature and not a faithful line." This is as funny as it is profound. Wonderful words empress.

You are always so insightful. Thanks for joining me, Nicholas.

Great poetry friend.

The female conscious holds us
and it has been driving us
forward in our human journey

Nothing can be truer than that.
The female does deserve more accolades than creation is ready to give because of their inestimable role.

Thanks my dear @blessedben. It is so important that our perceptions resonate in others.

The moon directs our spirits.

Esa es la idea.

La luna tiene un encanto especial para mí, esta frase me gustó demasiado: ""La sabiduría de la Luna es mayor que la sabiduría de la Tierra, porque la Luna ve el universo más cerca que la Tierra."

Como siempre, hermosa poesía, amiga @zeleiracordero , tienes un talento innato para describir el mundo con tus versos, como siempre, me encantó!. Además, las imágenes que escogiste para ilustrar el poema, son una belleza. Animo, falta menos! . Te sigo apoyando y leyendo desde aquí, te debo mi voto, estoy en recarga.

Gracias, estimada Maribel. Siempre es bueno tenerte de compañera de viaje.

Poesía inspiradora, nostálgica pero también esperanzadora, muy buena, felicitaciones, siga deleitándonos con tan noble y alteza de poesía, saludos.

Gracias por la lectura y el amable comentario. Saludos.

Hola, muy bella poesía, y bien escogidas las ilustraciones que la acompañan. Saludos.

@marena5, es altamente satisfactorio para mí que hayas tenido la bondad de leerme y comentar tu valiosa opinión. ¡Gracias!

Wonderful words and wonderful images:)

Grateful with such kindness on your part, dear Pryde.

Very profound, the obvious that we never really pay attention to. Lovely images as usual , you really take passionate time on your pieces:)

Your company is so nice and diligent, that I give the best of me in each delivery. Thank you, thank you very much for being and being on this path.

Beautiful poem, read this whilst listening to Wait by M83... perfect 👍

I love that you liked it and you connected with the music, my friend!

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