The wrong theory - Original poem - 100 Days poetry challenge Day #15

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Greetings, Steemians and colleagues from Steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 15, heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry summoned by steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them. We continue without fainting.


My musical theme that I connect to this creation is:Depeche mode-Wrong


"God did not create evil, evil is the result of the absence of God in the hearts of human beings"

Albert Einstein. (1879-1955) (Premio Nobel de Física , 1921)


The wrong theory


Presence of Light of the Universe
on the wrong planet
with the wrong race
in the wrong belly, with the announcement
wrong

Wrong embryonic dream
with the wrong genes
with the wrong blood
with the fallacious Brownian movement of the star
wrong

You grew up with the wrong people
learning wrong things
playing with wrong things
doing great things, in the where
wrong.

You learned with the wrong people
with the wrong books
with the wrong page
with the wrong verse, with the writing
wrong.

You lived with the wrong people.
You gave teachings to the wrong people.
You trusted the wrong people.
You challenged the wrong people, with the strength
wrong.

You gave yourself to the wrong people
you left them at the wrong time.
You have redeemed the most wrong one,
You have transmuted with the wrong alpha, with the wrong
alchemy.

You took the wrong cross.
You were a lamb slain for the wrong reasons
for wrong purposes
with the wrong ending, with the angle
wrong.

We lock you in the wrong place
we adore you in the wrong way
we cheat you with perverse treachery
and we waits for you in the wrong way



Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 15, en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía convocado por Steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste. Continuamos sin desmayo.


"Dios no creó el mal, el mal es el resultado de la ausencia de Dios en el corazón de los seres humanos"

Albert Einstein. (1879-1955) (Premio Nobel de Física, 1921)


La teoría equivocada


Presencia de Luz del Universo
en el planeta equivocado,
con la raza equivocada,
en el vientre equivocado, con la anunciación
equivocada.

Sueño embrionario equivocado,
con los genes equivocados,
con la sangre equivocada,
con falaz movimiento browniano, por la estrella
equivocada

Creciendo con la gente equivocada,
aprendiendo cosas equivocadas,
jugando con cosas equivocadas,
haciendo grandes cosas, en el dónde
equivocado

Aprendiendo de la gente equivocada,
con los libros equivocados,
con la página equivocada,
con el verso equivocado, la escritura
equivocada.

Viviendo entre gente equivocada,
enseñaste a la gente equivocada,
confiaste en la gente equivocada,
retaste a la gente equivocada, con la fuerza
equivocada.

Te entregaste a la gente equivocada,
los dejaste en el momento equivocado.
Redimiste a los más equivocados,
transmutaste con el alfa equivocado, con la alquimia
equivocada

Cargaste la cruz equivocada.
Cordero inmolado por razones equivocadas,
para fines equivocados,
con final equivocado, con el ángulo
equivocado.

Te encerramos en el lugar equivocado,
te adoramos de la manera equivocada,
te estafamos con alevosía perversa
y te esperamos de una manera,
equivocada.



Original poem by @zeleiracordero
Reading notes: Intermediates

Images by pixabay

Summary of my latest publications:
Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest - Day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14

Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.

Y, muy especialmente, a mi inestimable amigo @onthewayout . A la comunidad hispana y a equipos que están apoyando proyectos de hispanohablantes: #cervantes, #castellano, #provenezuela.

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Great write and markdown. I like how the quote explains the poem. There is nothing wrong with this world, only how we choose to react , wether we create good of our situations or bad. That's what I got from this piece. Nice pictures to go along with the poem, I would listen to the song but I'm not in the right place for that. Interesting your character.

Thanks for the visit and the nice comment, @dmilliz. It has been interesting to perceive that you have a penetrating look that sees beyond the apparent.

Love the irony and honesty of this piece. Wrongness is exactly why He came. Just wish we could get it right now.

Thanks for the effort of going to see what I'm creating, @firststeps. He is. His omnipresent capacity goes beyond you, me and all creation. Search and you will see that it has always been, it has never been gone, it just mutated. Call him and he will come. Faith.

@zeleiracordero, hermoso poema. Me gustó mucho la edición y el formato de este post. Está original y muy creativo.

Como siempre, es un gusto tenerte acompañando mis pasos en el mundo de la poesía @sandracabrera. Gracias, muchas gracias por estar siempre ahí.

Wonderful exploration of vision and words. Great job:)

Thanks for your words, @prydefoltz.

Gracias @zeleiracordero. Is there any way to right a wrong?

BTW... I have never seen pull left, pull right markdown like this in a poem. It reflects the flow of the poem well.

Thanks for your words, @mineopoly. I love that you liked the arrangement of the poem. I felt that it represented my intention better.

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