GUEST I - Original poem - 100 Days poetry challenge Day #4
Greetings, Steemians!
Thankful to the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry summoned by steemitschool: The broken mirror-Día1 / The habit of the monk-Día 2 / This skin that I inhabit-Day 3. Today I bring you a sonet, in the version of my mother tongue: Spanish, I managed to give it the form. But, in English, it only retains the structure. Still, I hope you like it. As music to accompany the reading, I suggest you: Everdream
The kind presence that surrounds me
and it elevates me in a breath of subliminal light,
we swim in this blue cross of sea water:
you, me, one, two; without confusing us
Sea of origin and ash that flood me,
penetrates me, traffics me against the light,
spilling his Rosicrucian mystic
in my guts, blood and fertile skin
You chose me as a key in my world,
as a piece to fit,
as a way to feel deep.
Lick and touch and smell the skin
and achieve the addictive transfundo
in a cyclic wheel for honey
HUÉSPED I
y eleva en subliminal soplo de luz.
Nadando en esta aguazul de mar en cruz:
tú, yo, una, juntas; sin que nos confunda.
me penetra, me trafica a contraluz,
deshojando su mística rosacruz
en mis entrañas, sangre y piel fecunda
como pieza para encajarte sobre él,
como vía para sentir profundo.
Para lamer y tocar y oler a piel
y lograr el adictivo transfundo
que los trae en cíclica rueda por miel
Reading notes:Intermediate
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Very erotic with a deeper spiritual message. Good work.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting, @firststeps. Your words fill me with encouragement, yes there is someone who penetrates the essence of what we create.
Hermosas palabras que dibujan un sentimiento de amor y espera.
Saludos, @zeleiracordero.
Muchísimas gracias por leerme y comentar tu impresión, @sandracabrera. Siempre es un gusto tenerte por aquí. . . Saludos!
Nice poem. Awesome lines.
Thanks for commenting on what you thought, @rexdickson. I love that you liked.