Sueño turmalina azul-Dream bluish tourmaline- Original poem -100 days poetry challenge day 35
Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 35 , en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.
Cita
Sueño turmalina azul
esperando que vengas.
Pasa un rato y sólo estoy en la nada.
y las luces me llevan a la orilla
de un río entre bloques de piedra.
con fondo azulado. Todo era frío,
el aire entraba en los huesos y allí hacía hueco.
empozada de tanto aterimiento,
se retrajo, pero era más atractivo que afuera.
consuelo y fue tan grato el recibimiento
que me fui con ella por toda la serpiente del río.
era azul, todo azul, hasta las piedras.
Flotando dentro el lecho del río todo era paz, nada extraño.
vi unos seres muy blancos, me veían y
susurraban entre sí, a sus oídos, no sé qué, pero me veían.
así como el fuego del agua, cada vez más
seductor y con textura de abrigo de esmerado talabartero.
sombras violetas en el horizonte azul turmalina,
y mi pena, asustada por el doble color, me lanzó por un sumidero.
Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 35 , heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.
My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Two steps from hell-Eria
O tal vez: Mi unicornio azul-Silvio Rodríguez
Dream bluish tourmaline
Waiting for you to come
Spend a while and I swim in the nothing.
and the lights take me to the shore
of a river between stone blocks.
with bluish background. Everything was cold,
the air entered the bones and there it made holes.
who, terrified, withdrew shivering from the cold, but he was
more attractive than outside.
comfort and the reception was so nice
that I went meandering with her all over the flowing river.
It was blue, all blue, even the stones.
floating in the river bed, everything was peace, nothing strange.
some very white beings, they saw me and They whispered to each other,
to their ears, I do not know what, but they saw me.
as well as the fire of water, more and more
seductive with the texture of the saddler's coat.
violet shadows on the blue tourmaline horizon,
and my sorrow, scared by the double color, threw me down a rain gutter.
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The images are of Pixabay
Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest-day 7 Winner of the day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 / Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna - day 28Winner of the day 28 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva-Day 29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30 / Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin- day 31 / Trenza - Braid-Day 32 / Ser poeta-Be a poet-Day 33 / Lluvia nocturna-Night rain .Day 34
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.
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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
Sueño azul turmalina, bello poema de sanación del campo energético.
¡Gracias! Me encanta que te haya gustado.
You poems always take me to a fantasy land. Bu explain something to me. At first i thought you were talking about love, but then at the end, it seems like passing over to the other side?
The poem that I am creating for tomorrow will tell you that patch that you need, dear @dmilliz. You have good clues :)
I love that you always connect your poems to music.
My dear @firststeps, that action is not capricious. For me, it is necessary to listen to music that connects me and my thoughts, every time I need to focus, so that thoughts do not get stuck and run over again. Thank you for your reading approach and loving closeness.
Your lines bring 3D colorful lanscape to my mind
Gracias, @zeleiracordero 😊
Thank you, dear ayahkasih.