This skin that I inhabit- Original poem -100 Days poetry challenge Day # 3

in #steemitschool6 years ago (edited)

Greetings, Steemians and especially the collective that lives in steemitschool.
Fulfilling DAY 3 of this great challenge, I present my contribution by recommending you to accompany or complete the reading of the poem with this video that I leave with you Carmina Burana

This skin that I inhabit


Torrent of recognized emotions of times returned.
I greet you in my memory, kind body of yesterday,
When you lent me your world, you renewed this being.
I honor you from here, in this now of acquitted facts.

This skin, this body absolutely mine
I share it with the universe.
This feeling, this inverse flow
it's not just mine, it's everyone's and the persistent ohm.

Original excuse to give us the occasion
to experience us from the exciting delivery,
to caress us from absolute zero to omega
and paint us with strident colors that implode the argon.
.


This reduced ionization energy
is the perfect key to achieve the slope
with a continuous fluent jump
of photoelectric absorption and absolute magnitude with Ilion.

This work of Electra, pleiad of loving tone,
He gave birth to Harmony as a yearning source,
that when pulsating strings vibrate,
turne the wheel of life that created this dual mode.

So, in the form of wave rumor,
it sounded a song that put fashion
with the wishes in oda.

And what started as a good gift,
ended up turned into black horse ,
resulting in game vain.

That's why it's time to scream at this and all time,
Without delay
the cantata de burana:

You have to touch the strings of the heart;
because destiny
collapses the strong man
Who cries?
The Wheel of Fortune turns;
a man is humiliated by his fall,
and another raised to the heights.

Winners and losers
come and go.

They are returned without stopping.
Times do not stop
and we all go to dar
in stellar dives,
to the same place.

One day, load of emotions.
Another, light and conscience.
Many, only absentee.

Neither here nor there.

With grasping or
presumption of
have a
body.

This skin that I inhabit.


LA PIEL QUE HABITO

Torrente de emociones reconocidas de tiempos devueltos.
Te saludo en mi recuerdo, amable cuerpo de ayer,
cuando me prestaste tu mundo, renovaste este ser.
Te honro desde aquí, en este ahora de hechos absueltos.

Esta piel, este cuerpo absolutamente mío
lo comparto con el universo.
Este sentir, este fluir inverso
no es sólo mío, es de todos y del persistente ohmio.

Original excusa para darnos en un trazo la ocasión
de experimentarnos desde la emocionante entrega,
de acariciarnos desde el cero absoluto hasta el omega,
de pintarnos con colores estridentes que implosionen el argón
.
Esta reducida energía de ionización
es la clave perfecta para alcanzar la pendiente
con un salto continuo fluente
de absorción fotoeléctrica y magnitud absoluta con Ilión.

Esta hechura de Electra, pléyade de amoroso tono,
le dio luz a Harmonía como fuente anhelante,
que al vibrar cuerdas pulsantes,
giró la rueda de la vida que creó este dual modo.

Así, en forma de rumor de ola,
sonó una canción que puso moda
con los deseos en oda.

Y lo que comenzó como amable regalo,
se volvió negro caballo,
resultando en juego vano.

Por eso toca gritar en esta y toda hora,
sin demora
la cantata de burana:

"toquen las cuerdas del corazón;
el destino
derrumba al hombre fuerte
que llora.
La rueda de la Fortuna gira;
un hombre es humillado por su caída,
y otro elevado a las alturas."

Ganadores y perdedores
vienen y van.

Se devuelven sin parar.
Los tiempos no se detienen
y todos vamos a dar,
en zambullidas estelares,
a un mismo lugar.

Un día, carga de emociones.
Otro, luz y conciencia.
Muchos, sólo absencia.

Ni aquí ni allá.

Con la aferrada
presunción
de poseer un
cuerpo.

Esta piel que habito.

Original poem by @zeleiracordero

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Reading notes: Intermediate


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Thank you for reading my poem and for your suggestion in the comment, @ladyluck. I go and follow you.

i follow you back, thank you

Wow, what a beautiful poem, stellar.

Same energy into different bodies. Nice view. Wish you luck!

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