Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin - Original poem - 100 days poetry challenge day 31

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 31 , en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste. Continuamos sin desmayo.


"A veces, tan sólo a veces, lo que está siendo es lo que parece"

Alejandro Sanz

Duende amatista

Mi duende
se ha vestido
de silencio.

Se puso en pausa y se borró de mi faz cuadrada
se puso de corbata la luna y ahora no puede salir de día.
Tira de la corbata y se asfixia, el nudo no sale, se aprieta, se
tuerce y se pone azul de tanto reír, como le enseñó el gran
poeta @naquoya llenando con eso de amor su opulenta olla.
Con @mineopoly lloró ante la tumba perdida
de un gran poeta olvidado, sembrado en suelo
extranjero. @d-pend le dio una lección cósmica
and @prydefoltz le enseñó que el trato directo y la
sonrisa sincera acompaña y da aliento porque no es fácil
venir cada día a mostrarse desnudo delante de gente que juzga.
La maestra @firststeps la anudó a un árbol de vida, de fe y de coraje.
@blessedben la llenó de bendiciones y, de amistad, @sansoncarrasco,
@dmilliz, @girlbeforemirror, @carmalain, @acousticsteveo y @hartdefoe.
De corazón, @corderosiete su hermano, hoy de cumpleaños. Dos soles benévolos
la alcanzan, le zafan el nudo de luna y la besan, dejándola libre. Mi duende no es mala,
es una niña juguetona y traviesa que ha aprendido tanto de tantos, desde que está en la escuela. Ahora, se ha quitado el traje de viento, está empeñada en coserse unos nuevos y ha creado unos vestiditos de niña, bordados .


Greetings, Steemians and colleagues from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 31 , heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them. We continue without fainting.

My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Mi marciana-Alejandro Sanz

"Sometimes, just sometimes, what is happening is what it seems"

Alejandro Sanz


Amethyst goblin

My elf
has dressed
of silence

It was stopped and
erased from my
square faceHe put on his moon tie and
now he can not leave during the day.
He puts on his tie and drowns, the knot does not
come out, he squeezes it, he twists and turns blue with
laughter, like the great poet @naquoya filling with
that love his opulent pot.
With @mineopoly he cried
before the lost tomb of a great
forgotten poet, sown on the ground
Exterior. @d-pend gave him a cosmic lesson
and @prydefoltz taught him that direct relationships
and the sincere smile accompanies and encourages because
it is notit's easy to come every day to be nakedin front of The people who judge.
The teacher @firststeps tied him to a tree of life, to faith and courage. @Blessedben full of blessings and,friendship, @sansoncarrasco, @dmilliz, @girlbeforemirror, @carmalain, @acousticsteveo and @hartdefoe. It filled her with heart, her brother @corderosiete, who is celebrating his birthday today. Two benevolent suns reach him, loosen the knot of the moon and kiss him leaving him free. My elf is not bad, she is a playful and naughty girl who has learned a lot from so many people, since she is in school, now that she has taken off her wind suit,is determined to sew herself, some and has created some girl dresses, embroiderys



Original poem by @zeleiracordero

Reading notes:Intermediates

The images are of Pixabay

Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest - Day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 / Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna -Day 28 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva-Day 29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30


April 06 , 2018


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Great sister poem, a walk by our poets friends. Thank you for the birthday. Amen.

Thank you, brother of my heart.

d'awww, this is too cute, I'm glad I didn't miss it <3

Thank you, thank you very much, friend @carmalain. I am touched by his words, almost to tears.

this is a warm tribute to his music, @zeleiracordero, your words too are touching. <3

Thanks fot the mention! We shall prevail!

Thanks to you, @sansoncarrasco for your sincere friendship and support in this way.

Qué hermoso poema. Saludos, @zeleiracordero

Saludos, @sandracabrera. Gracias por la visita y el constante apoyo.

Oh my!!
This is really great.
y gracias amigo por considerarme digno de un lugar en tu poema.
para eso, simplemente gracias.
Estoy agradecido. Más tinta en tu pluma a medida que avanzamos.

Thanks for your details, friend @blessedben.

Gracias. You are always so sweet.

Thanks to you, friend @mineopoly

Hermoso y sentido, te felicito! Exitos en el camino que queda. Te sigo leyendo.

Gracias por la compañía y el comentario bonito, @marybellrg. Me encanta que te haya gustado.

Thanks for drawing my attention to this. Loved it, lots of fun. Happy to be a part of it, and to help with laughter. Sometimes I should take more of my own advice :)

Thanks for the comment, teacher @naquoya. Certainly, we do not always do what we say.

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