Scarlet moon - Original poem - 100 days poetry challenge- Day 27

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Greetings, Steemians and colleagues from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 27, heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them. We continue without fainting.


My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is:
Enigma-Return To Innocence


"The moon is the reflection of your heart and the light of the moon is the brightness of your love."

Debasish Mridha



Scarlet moon


I sew my fingers to not cause you anguish
with any of my threads
Then you have no illusions
nor this madness that, sometimes,
Cut the skin like a crystal.
Shot to the sea, with a stone, my ancestral voice,
what weights with my silences,
just so the knives do not appear in your mouth.

I get embedded in the eyes
burnished mirror gems
so that you do not burn with anxiety,
aversions or cries
or hot breath
lengthening a solstice that blooms on the bridge
of this mysterious moon,
of soft scarlet.

I do not touch you to root out,
From the beginning,
my silly way of touching you the fibers
until the gall of caprice.
I build myself inside
a new and different world:
of peace, of matt pearls.
With braided daggers, worn, without edges.

Is that what you want, thunder sky?
Does that soothe your abyssal depth?
Can not you see that I leave my scarlet tone in your sky?
And you, like a bird in flight, you create waves, flying,
before falling on me like prey.
I'm burning with voices.
I'm burning with screams that unleash your insomnia
and they embroider the holes in my cliff.
I am not your enemy, do not block the sun.



Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 27, en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste. Continuamos sin desmayo.


"La luna es el reflejo de tu corazón y la luz de la luna es el brillo de tu amor."

Debasish Mridha


Luna escarlata


Me coso los dedos para no causarte angustia
con cualquiera de mis hilos.
Sólo para que no tengas delirios
ni esta locura que, a veces,
corta la piel como un vidrio.
Echo al mar, con una piedra, mi voz ancestral,
que le pasa cuentas a mis silencios,
sólo para que en tu boca no amanezcan cuchillos.

Me incrusto en los ojos
gemas de espejo bruñido
para que no se te encienda de ansias,
disgustos o gritos
la respiración caliente,
alargando un solsticio que florece en el puente
de esta misteriosa luna
de suave escarlata.

No te toco para que acabe de raíz,
desde el principio,
mi necia forma de amarte
hasta la hiel del capricho.
Me construyo por dentro
un mundo nuevo, distinto:
de paz, de perlas mates.
Con dagas trenzadas, gastadas, sin bordes.

¿Es eso lo que tú quieres, cielo de truenos?
¿Calma eso tus honduras abisales?
¿No ves que estoy dejando mi tono escarlata en tu cielo?
Y tú, como ave engrifada, me ondeas antes de caer
sobre mí como una presa.
Estoy ardiendo de voces.
Me estoy quemando de gritos que deshilachan tu insomnio
y zurcen los huecos de mi precipicio
No soy tu enemiga, no rebajes mi luz.



Original poem by @zeleiracordero

Reading notes:Intermediates

The images are by Pixabay

Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest - Day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 / Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26


April 02, 2018


Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.

And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.

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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS

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'cos I am not your enemy, I won't block the sun 😊

Ha, ha ... Good that, @ayahkasih. Thanks for the humor in your comment.

Este poema me llegó especialmente. Te superas día a día.

Gracias gigantes por tanto apoyo, hermano @sansoncarrasco ;)

Love the moon. Love the poetry hehe. Thanks for sharing. I'm Oatmeal Joey Arnold. Happy Easter 2018.

Thank you for your kind visit and the nice comment, @joeyarnoldvn. The moon also creates illusion for me, hypnotizes me and I love it.

The moon is a source of mystery and intrigue, and captured well with your poetic artistry here.

Muy agradecida con tu visita, amigo @naquoya.

Me impresiona tanta creatividad y pasión por la poesía, mientras los días 🌻 avanzan.
Felicitaciones.
Saludos, @zeleiracordero.

Gracias por la visita y el cumplido, amiga @sandracabrera.

WOW! I think you should be in the advanced category. You never seem to fall off on the greatness.

Thanks for the compliment, friend @dmilliz. We are learning together the way to Oz to reach the center of the heart to poetry, accompanied, we can, alone does not happen the same.

Wonderful write, zeleira:)

Thanks, my friend on the way @prydefoltz.

La Luna siempre será mi favorita! Tu poema , hermoso, gracias por compartir tus letras llenas de emociones. Esta frase me encantó: ""La luna es el reflejo de tu corazón y la luz de la luna es el brillo de tu amor."

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