Rosa guerrera- Rose of war - Original poem -100 days poetry challenge day 43

in #poetry6 years ago

Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 43, en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.


"Algunos días no habrá una canción en tu corazón. Canta de todos modos"

Emory Austin


Rosa guerrera


A mi amiga Damary


Incrustada en el espejo, tus manos son ríos
que acarician la zona de
tus senos.

Uno se levanta solo y te mira confundido,
pero tú, delante de tu cuerpo,
lo amas.

Tus sentidos están inclinados al borde
de tu miedo,
angustiado.

¡Estás viva!

Sintiendo gratitud y rechazo.
Belleza y susto están
en tu busto.

Titilando, tus rodillas
se vuelven
fuertes.

Es tan asombroso y extraño
y es tan grande
la alegría.

¡Estás viva!

Tocar lo que falta te da risa llorosa y es tan
fuerte que quita tu
miedo.

Tus ojos son mariposas que se posan en el que queda,
desafían lo que ves suspendido
en el viento.

El temor se quema en saciedad
de fe, oración
y vigilia.

¡Estás viva!

Eres una mujer guerrera colapsando el asedio
de las arenas del
tiempo


Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 43, heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.


My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is:Sade - Soldier Of Love


"Some days there will not be a song in your heart, sing anyway"

Emory Austin

Rose of war


For my her friend Damary


Embedded in the mirror, your hands are rivers
that caress the area
of your breasts

One gets up alone and looks at you confused,
but you, in front of your body,
you love him.

Your senses are tilted to the edge
of your fear,
afflicted.

You are her alive!

You feel gratitude and rejection. Beauty
and fright are
in your bust

Before your knees tremble
you become
in strong

It's so surprising and strange
and it's so big
your happiness.

You are her alive!

Touching what is missing makes you laugh and cry, so
strong that eliminates its
fear.

Your eyes like butterflies rest on the one that remains,
they challenge what you see suspended
in the wind.

Fear burns in satiety
of faith, prayer
and vigil.

You are her alive!

You are a warrior woman who collapsed the siege
of the sands of
time



Original poem by @zeleiracordero

Reading notes:Intermediates

Source of images:
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Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest-day 7Ganador del día 7- Winner of the day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 /Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna - day 28Doble ganador: Día 28 y de la semana 4-double winner of the day 28 and of the week 4 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva Day29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30 / Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin- day 31 / Trenza - Braid-Day 32 / Ser poeta-Be a poet-Day 33 / Lluvia nocturna-Night rain .Day 34Ganador del día 34- Winner of the day 34 / Sueño turmalina azul-Dream bluish tourmaline-Day 35 / Resplandeciente zircón-Resplendent zircon-Day 36 /Luz de adentro-Light of inside-day 37 / Péndulo humano-Human pendulum -day 38 /Ópalo de fuego-Opal of fire- day 39 /Esta mujer el domingo-This woman on Sunday- day 40 / Sol naciente-Rising Sun- day 41Rojo carmesí - Crimson red- day 42


April 18 , 2018


Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.

And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.

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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS

Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...6985591ee86eebb8920d6ce133a86550 simplemente gracias.jpg

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Wow. Going back to what is being felt by the body?

Returning to the body? Yes ... it could be a good optic, friend Nicholas.

Very good topic you chose today. You blessed your friend with wonderful warming word.

I have tried to pay a tribute to the "woman," during this week. The theme of yesterday and today, are uncomfortable, but full of reality. Every time, it is more frequent to run into cases of breast cancer. It is something that scares, because of the proximity and because it can attack anyone. But, what integrity and warrior spirit develop women who have had to pass through this difficult test.

I have lost some friends who lost the battle with breast ca. I have some friends who still keep fighting. And I have some friends who are survivors.

Your poem will encourage them and their families.

What a pity! This disease is becoming more common.

A beautiful and raw tribute to true warriors.

It is so difficult to face a reality like that because it is part of the "physical being" of the woman, the breasts define us in different ways.

Una oración de sanación para la guerrera.

Sí, es una especie de acompañamiento en el dolor por el trauma enfrentado en el preciso momento en que se mira por primera vez al espejo, luego de la extirpación de uno de los senos por presentar cáncer de mama. Es duro.

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