Ópalo de fuego-Opal of fire--Original poem -100 days poetry challenge day 39

in #poetry6 years ago

Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 39 , en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.


"Si enciendes una luz para alguien, también iluminará tu camino"

Buda


Ópalo de fuego


Claridad
es despertar
el azabache noble.
La armonía de ese sol
magnánimo,
nos persuade que ya no somos
marionetas.
La naturaleza ordena
las huellas plantadas.
El paso de un corcel alado
no asienta la tierra.
El tormento de existir está allí,
por la miel que la mente exige.
El orgasmo existencial
soporta cristales
a cambio de bengalas.
Es la balanza de la mescolanza.
Creamos, con esta energía,
el altar
del supuesto "amor".


Claridad
es despertar
a la unidad.
Obra,
reflejo,
deleite,
idolatría,
son ganchos,
anclas,
cantos de sirena,
supremacía mental.
El salto cuántico
advierte:
El placer
no deja saber,
es el velo
de la mente.


Claridad
Es romper el silencio
con luz hiriente,
penetrar la ilusión
en las profundidades
del ser,
donde no hay rodillas,
sólo ardiente
ópalo de fuego
que espera
la eclosión,
el gran rasgón
que implosiona
los atavíos
de una pupa
mística
que conoce
los tiempos.

Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 39 , heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.


My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Angèlia Grace – Time


"If you light a light for someone, it will also light your road"

Buddha



Opal of fire


The clarity
is waking up
the noble black stone.
The harmony of that sun
magnanimous, it is convincing,
no longer we are puppets,
There is an order of nature
for the planted footprints.
The passage of a winged steed
does not settle the earth
The torment of existing is there,
for the honey that the mind demands.
The existential orgasm
supports crystals
in exchange for flares.
It is the balance of the hodgepodge.
We create, with this energy,
the altar
of the supposed "love".


The clarity
is waking up
to the unit.
Job,
reflection,
delight,
idolatry,
they are hooks,
anchors,
Sirens that sing,
mental supremacy.
The quantum leap
warns:
pleasure
does not let us know,
it is the veil
of the mind.


Clarity
is breaking the silence
with hurtful light.
The illusion is penetrating
in the deep
of being,
where the knees
it burns in the
opal fire
waiting
the hatching,
the big tear
that implodes
the traps.
A chrysalis
of mysticism
who knows
the times.



Original poem by @zeleiracordero

Reading notes:Intermediates

Source of images: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4

Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest-day 7Ganador del día 7- Winner of the day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 /Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna - day 28Doble ganador: Día 28 y de la semana 4-double winner of the day 28 and of the week 4 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva Day29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30 / Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin- day 31 / Trenza - Braid-Day 32 / Ser poeta-Be a poet-Day 33 / Lluvia nocturna-Night rain .Day 34 / Sueño turmalina azul-Dream bluish tourmaline-Day 35 / Resplandeciente zircón-Resplendent zircon-Day 36 /Luz de adentro-Light of inside-day 37 / Péndulo humano-Human pendulum -day 38


April 14 , 2018


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Buen poema, cada día superas al anterior. Te felicito hermana.

¡Gracias! Me gusta mucho que te haya agradado.

Superb write:) I loved reading the Spanish version too; although, I do not understand it all. The sound in marvellous:)

Thanks, Pryde. It's a great honor for me, that you thought it was nice.

Awesome poetry amigo.
I do really envy your mastery of markdown.
Great work.

Thank you dear friend.

Loved how you used the power stones. I have a few myself.

Thank you appreciated travel companion.

ame esto, es demasiado yo <3

Gracias por tanto amor. nahu.

a ti, por escribir esos poemas tan acertados <3

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