Sand castles - Original poem - 100-days-poetry-challenge-day-18
Greetings, Steemians and colleagues from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 18, heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry summoned by steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them. We continue without fainting.
My musical theme that I connect to this creation is Pink Floyd - Coming back to life
Sand castles
I wanted to navigate, remove anchors,
take off ...
and shipwrecked I was.
that caresses and runs over in my own wake.
and it comes in a tailspin,
against me.
but my storm scared her.
they will laugh at her and me,
drowned in a drop of water.
and a radiant full moon
shining on my sandcastles.
Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 18, en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste. Continuamos sin desmayo.
Castillos de arena
Yo me quería navegar, quitarme anclas,
despegar... Y, la marea llené, llorando de miedo.
y naufragué contra la espuma
que acaricia y corre en mi propia estela.
que se eleva y viene en picada
contra mí.
pero mi tormenta la asustó.
se reirá de ella y de mí,
ahogadas en una gota de agua.
y una radiante luna llena
iluminando mis castillos de arena.
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
Reading notes: Intermediates
Summary of my latest publications:
Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 / Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
Muy especialmente, a mi inestimable amigo @onthewayout . A la comunidad hispana y a equipos que están apoyando proyectos de hispanohablantes: #cervantes, #castellano, #provenezuela.
Also, to my new friends in the community #gratefulvibes
If you have not yet joined the Steemit School Discord, do it now:Discord
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
Summary of my latest publications:
Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 / Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
Muy especialmente, a mi inestimable amigo @onthewayout . A la comunidad hispana y a equipos que están apoyando proyectos de hispanohablantes: #cervantes, #castellano, #provenezuela.
Also, to my new friends in the community #gratefulvibes
If you have not yet joined the Steemit School Discord, do it now:Discord
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
But tonight there will be millions of stars
and a radiant full moon
shining on my sandcastles.
Some captivating penning, zeleira:)
Thanks for reading, friend @prydefoltz. Your comments encourage me. I hope to improve every time.
:)
I love the imagery and images you used in this piece . You always find the write pictures to fit your beautiful words . ( I need to re-read listening to the song )
When going after our dreams and desires it is hard to see how they will manifest , and failure and disappointment will come and discourage , but each day there is hope!
Thank God, "every day the sun rises", there is a saying in my land. Thanks for the visit and the nice comment, mate @dmilliz.
Another master piece from a great poet.
Great poem Amigo.
Tremendous breeze for my ego, friend @blessedben, thank you very much ... But no, I'm just an apprentice, looking for poetry in my soul. I love that you like what I'm producing.
Saludos, es muy sentimental y tierno este poema.
Saludos, @zeleiracordero.
Me gusta leer tus creaciones.
Gracias, amiga @sandracabrera.
I had to read this twice to fully appreciate it. Good work.
yes, the strongest lines of this piece are at the end and are universal human experiences, but you have built to them well, just as you have build the sandcastle well, to weather the waves of life and get to the night on the beach under the heavens blanketed in starlight.
Thank you for sharing, @zeleiracordero.
Thank you, thank you very much @carmalain. I am very happy that you read me and that you liked what I am producing.