Esta mujer el domingo-This woman on Sunday- Original poem -100 days poetry challenge day 40

in #poetry6 years ago

Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 40 , en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.

“En el cansancio me fortalezco y maduro.”

Janus Korczak

Esta mujer el domingo


Esta mujer, el domingo,
es un eco de sueño
deambulante.
Es un sol que se revierte en el oleaje
del espiral de un caracol ensimismado.

Bajo una luz de zumo de naranja,
es desayuno en la cama.
Luego, como la hora, soledad y camino;
armonía y abstracción de misticismo,
esplendor de anochecer en Sirio.

El domingo la doblega en las esquinas.
Se aleja lentamente
este cuarzo lunar desgastado
por entre los taciturnos suspiros,
de frente hacia el ocaso,
esta mujer busca su punto y seguido.

Hacia un cielo de plata
que estremece el frío,
hacia el camino de los vuelos que huyen
del sol desnudo,
se aleja lentamente
este río de mujer terca y suave.

Recuerdos dilatados timbran
sus árboles sensitivos,
con una voz que se aleja entre nubes borrosas,
denunciando unos ojos cansados,
y unas manos que son corderos gemelos
amarrados a un teclado,
con dedos que son lenguas come letras,
insomnes.


Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 40, heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.


My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Angèlia Grace - INTERSTELLAR


"In fatigue I get stronger and mature."

Janus Korczak

This woman on Sunday


This woman, on Sunday,
it is an echo of dream
that wanders.
It is a sun that reverts in the swell
from the spiral of a self-absorbed snail.

Under a light of orange juice,
It's breakfast in bed.
Then, as the hour, the loneliness and the way;
harmony and abstraction in mysticism.
The splendor of the afternoon in Sirius.

On Sunday, it bends at the corners.
It moves away slowly
this worn moon quartz
through the taciturn sighs.
In front of the sunset,
This woman looks for her point and follows him.

Towards a silvery sky
who trembles from cold,
towards the route of fleeing flights
of the naked sun,
moves away slowly
This river of stubborn and soft woman.

Memories dilated timbran
the sensitive trees from her,
with a voice that moves away among blurry clouds,
denouncing tired eyes,
and hands that are twin lambs
tied to a keyboard,
with fingers that eat letters
insomniacs.



Original poem by @zeleiracordero

Reading notes:Intermediates

Source of images: Pixabay

Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest-day 7Ganador del día 7- Winner of the day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 /Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna - day 28Doble ganador: Día 28 y de la semana 4-double winner of the day 28 and of the week 4 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva Day29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30 / Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin- day 31 / Trenza - Braid-Day 32 / Ser poeta-Be a poet-Day 33 / Lluvia nocturna-Night rain .Day 34 / Sueño turmalina azul-Dream bluish tourmaline-Day 35 / Resplandeciente zircón-Resplendent zircon-Day 36 /Luz de adentro-Light of inside-day 37 / Péndulo humano-Human pendulum -day 38 /Ópalo de fuego-Opal of fire- day 39


April 15 , 2018


Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.

And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.

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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS

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Under a light of orange juice,
It's breakfast in bed.
Then, as the hour, the loneliness and the way;
harmony and abstraction in mysticism.
The splendor of the afternoon in Sirius.

Nothing better than a good sleep in when needed:) Great write, zeleira:)

True, nothing better than staying in bed when the fatigue is old as a house and galloping like a horse. Thanks for the company, Pryde.

Nada sobra, amiga. Toda palabra en su santo lugar. Ánimo. Cada vez lo haces mejor. Un abrazo.

Gracias, amiga. Tu acompañamiento es apreciado.

El domingo, día de levantarse tarde con el desayuno en la cama.

Así mismo, hermano.

great poetry my friend and classmate

On Sunday, it bends at the corners.
It moves away slowly
this worn moon quartz
through the taciturn sighs.

My best lines.
You really have a way with words.
Keep it up!

"with fingers that eat letters
insomniacs"
Greetings eternal poet. Your words are bliss.

Thank you, my dear travel companion.

You have such a wonderful way with words, your poems are beautiful x

Thank you for your beautiful words, compañera @truck-life family. It is very satisfying to reach the fiber of a poet as sensitive as you are.

I enjoy the way you weave a poem. 😎

Thanks for the warm accompaniment and your nice comments, appreciated @acousticsteveo.

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