Fireflies: Pupa (book 2, entry 30) - Closer
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FIREFLIES: Pupa
(book 2)Entry 30
The sound of the doorbell roused her from her notepad. She had been detailing the order of steps that she needed to take, in this world and her own.
Too early for the mailman. As she opened the front door, the color drained from her face. Quite literally, she willed the blood to circle back into her cheeks.
"Hi there! I don't know if you remember me. We met briefly almost two weeks ago, but then I didn't see you around! When I saw you pull into the driveway last night, I figured I'd come check up on you - maybe see if you wanted to get together for coffee sometime?"
Well, this was part one of her plan: Keep your enemies closer. She hadn't been sure how she would take that first step, but it seemed he was going to make this easy on her.
"Hi Derek." She forced her most sincere smile. "I think that would be a great idea. I recently came back from a trip, and I'm a little out of sorts. Jetlag and all. Getting back into a normal routine with a new friend would be nice." She hoped that he didn't notice the hard swallow as she forced her mouth to form the word "friend".
"Forgive me - I feel like an idiot, especially now that you remembered my name. But refresh my memory?"
"Aria." She stuck her hand out to greet him formally, once again feeling for any sign of power pulsing beneath his flesh. There was none.
"That's right! For some reason, I could have sworn it was something else!"
She stilled her heart which had picked up its pace. "Oh really?" Laughing nonchalantly, she pressed further. "What name was that?"
"I don't know now!" Bemused, he joined her in laughter. "It seemed like it was right on the tip of my tongue, but now it's completely gone!"
She shrugged, relieved. "So when would you like to get together?"
He paused, and then dared to be bold. "What are you doing now?"
No time like the present
"Let me get my purse and I'll follow you there."
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You're a born writer your technique with the monologue and dialogues is definitely astounding and I could notice the conversational mood and they were able to do so freely without barrier the truth is that I love the way you dabbled around no pressure, I'll really be reading more from you. And forgive me to I have not been coming around lately
No apologies!!!!
So many people to support... It's understandable! We hsve been here a long time and have accrued many friends to visit!
When we visit....then it's a nice surprise right? Hehehe
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And thank you very much for the compliments on my writing!!!!! I appreciate that!!!! :)
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Lol I guess I feel guilty lol hahaha, sometimes well I ought to drop by sometimes but the thing is I often get carried away with other stuff and well forget, Wow thanks for the tips really, you're amazing.
Oh don't feel guilty! Hehehehe really!!!! I don't always get to your posts either!
It's just the nature of being here :)
You're welcome.for the tip Hehehe I like to tip my Fireflies readers because I love the engagement hehehe
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wooooo hoooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! thanks @steemitboard and @arcange!!!! :)
For anyone who hasn't started reading Fireflies,.... GET READING NOW! Start with the first, its worth it! The whole story sucks you in so you don't wanna stop reading or turning that page. Well done, very well done!
Wow!!!!!!! That is such a HUGE compliment!!!! You went ALLLLLL the way back and caught up! Hehehehhee I'm SO honored!!! Thank you so much!!!!!
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(I tip all my readers who comment on the story posts...but hope you don't mind that I need to celebrate that comment with you by giving you a bigger tip hahaha cuz you just made my day!!!!)
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No problem. I'm still catching up, but I really like it! Well done!
hehehehe love it!!!! sorry I didnt post yesterday cuz we were on the road most of the day and then headed to the grand canyon :) but about to post now hehehe
(although - it won't affect you yet - cuz you're not caught up! hehehehe)
so glad that your'e enjoying it! and you're very welcome for the tip! hehehe
Oh, and thanks for the tip, much appreciated!
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I think he knows who he really is.. and he's toying with her.
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Hmmmmm maybe maybe maybe!
Then again... Maybe not! Hehee
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Wow, your creative juices are flowing. That's a good sign that you are quite healthy, which is awesome.
A little advice? Wherever she/her or any pronoun referring to the same person is used multiple times in the same sentence, it sounds better if the first one is the proper name.
Example, "The sound of the doorbell roused her from her notepad."
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Thank you!!!! I usually do that when I have two females in the scene... But usually with Fireflies....I kinda like to keep the reader guessing for just a bit 😉
So that people are a little bit like. Who!?! Where!! What! Why????
Hahahahhaa keeps them on their toes! And also... A little bit confused (like Talia)
It's just the nature of this story and how it unfolds...
And yes they are flowing!!!! Can I ask.... Did you need to go back and refresh your memory with the first book? Or did it all come right back to you?
And you caught up quickly!!!! Lololol
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Gotcha, yes it does force you to pay extra attention as you read on.
As for catching up...I haven't quite yet. Sorry if I made such an implication. I'm just flowing with the notes. I'm using at least 10 Social Media Platforms in an attempt to get my content out there and see which one's have a future, since they are all quite new and more are coming out like rabbits these days. So, I'm spread quite thin, but I will fully get caught up, promise.
I'm not one that needs to read things in order. My attention span mimics that of a person with AADD these days. I have a lot going on and jump around a lot.😀
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Hehehhee ok well apply that extra tip for when you catch up! Lololol
And yes I know what you mean about reading in order..but.........
Buuuuuttttttt
I kinda like to keep you in suspense!!
Now when you go back and read- you'll already know what's coming and who is there and who isn't! Hehehe
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😂😂😂, yup... I'm a party crasher like that...😂😂😂
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Lololol well..I can't complain. You're reading!!!!
I'll just have to settle for surprising you in the future hehehe
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@dreemsteem, In my opinion sometimes when people stay far from others, people can hold the perception about them and sometimes it can be negative one. But truth is, when we spent time with them then we understand that most of the times perception and judgements are not right.
Have a joyful time ahead and stay blessed.
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very true!
but i'm not sure about Derek... after all... we did see what kind of person he was in Book 1 lol
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