On the edge of time/Original poem – [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 29)]
On the edge of time
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Our transit must be written.
Do not forget that we are victims
from a time in another time
it is limited time.
Let's leave traces
in the way of others
An I Love You,
a smile,
a hug,
a hand shake,
a gift,
they are things that we are not going to take to the astral plane.
The strength is in the joining.
With the help of everyone, the load is lighter.
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Al filo del tiempo
nuestro tránsito debe escribirse.
Olvidamos que somos víctimas
de un tiempo dentro del tiempo.
es tiempo limitado.
Dejamos huellas
en el camino de los demás.
Un te amo,
una sonrisa,
un abrazo,
un apretón de manos,
un regalo,
son cosas que no vamos a llevar al plano astral.
La fuerza está en la unión.
Con la ayuda de todos, la carga es más ligera.
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Separator
Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit School
4/4/18
Reading notes: Beginner
Original by @corderosiete
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I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness Day 2 traditional-fishermen Day 3 river-goblins Day 4 persistence-mirror Day 5 in-the-apse Day 6 sea-mermaid Day 7 shore-fisherman Day 8 my-wild-guitar Day 9 desolation Day 10 desolation II Day 11 Anthem to the sea Day 12 I'm strange in my city Day 13 solemn-desert Day 14 World of poets Day 15 Sorrow Day 16 Hero of love Day 17 agony of an existence Day 18 One day later Day 19 before dawn Day 20 naughty dog Day 21 Exact time Day 22 between crosses Day 23 footprints in the sea Day 24 Flowers Day 25 Uncertainty Day 26 Time chains Day 27 Melancholia Day 28 The call
Captive in a thin timeline
Our transit must be written.
Do not forget that we are victims
from a time in another time
Lovely write, Cordero:)
Thank you friend for reading the poem. Greetings.
Hermoso poema con mucha sabiduría por transmitir, mi hermano. ¡Excelente trabajo!
Gracias hermana. Estamos creciendo gracias a @d-pend. Siempre agradezco a Dios por ponerlo en mi camino.
Again the maestro strikes. BRAVO!!!
I'm glad you like it
Powerful message for living. Well written man.
I haven't been active for some time now and i have missed your confirm poetry with its splendid images.
Greetings friend
Thanks friend.
Have a good time, @corderosiete 😊