Persistence mirror (original poetry) [Day 4]
Hello, at the end of the week, I want to dedicate this poem to an extraordinary woman on the other side of my world. Greetings Macedonia. Thanks Steemit for your presentation. [Day 4 of 100]
Persistence mirror
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Persistence mirror
You, woman, visionary
in your incipient professional career
you had to emigrate,
other nations saw you emerge.
You, woman, did not intimidate yourself
for not exercising
what you studied
with so much illusion.
You, woman, opened doors
imposing your imagination,
with sodium secretion
you have found redemption.
You, woman, light project
fluorescent white,
you cling to the cosmic promise
to help your brothers.
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You, woman, your face
turned towards a strong body
bastion of the family
blessed by the Cosmos.
You, woman, believer of your traditions
you breathe again
the infinite particles of your nation
multiplied by two.
You, woman, ambassador of respect
You try to thread
the one fallen in disappointment
live in a better world.
Espejo de la persistencia
Tú, mujer, visionaria
en tu incipiente carrera profesional
tuviste que emigrar,
otras naciones te vieron emerger.
Tú, mujer, no te intimidaste
por no hacer ejercicio
lo que estudiaste
con tanta ilusión.
Tú, mujer, abriste puertas
imponiendo tu imaginación,
con secreción de sodio
has encontrado la redención.
Tú, mujer, proyecta luz
blanco fluorescente,
te aferras a la promesa cósmica
para ayudar a tus hermanos.
Tú, mujer, tu cara
volteada hacia un cuerpo fuerte
bastión de la familia
bendecido por el Cosmos.
Tú, mujer, creyente de tus tradiciones
vuelves a respirar
las partículas infinitas de tu nación
multiplicado por dos.
Tú, mujer, embajadora de respeto
Intentas enhebrar
al caído en decepción
viva en un mundo mejor.
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Original by @corderosiete
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Original by @corderosiete
The persistence, one more quality of the woman to stand out, especially in this "week of the woman". Good subject for a poem and you took it very well, @corderosiete. Congratulations!
Thank you, we are in the week of the woman. I am an advocate for women's rights.
A supportive write, cordero. Love the sound of the Spanish:)
Thanks, I'm flattered.
Gracias, Muchas Gracias, buena poema...No te preocupes...Gracias por tus pallabras buenas 😀
Enaltecido por sus palabras. Saludos.
I see you're celebrating Women's day all over again.
Really nice.
Before finishing the week, I wanted to exalt them. Greetings.
Very wise.
Very timely poem. I love the repetitive call to women, it creates a beat and a sense of rhythm throughout.
Thanks for your wise words. Greetings.
Thanks for dropping by earlier! Is this a personal dedication to a friend or to someone famous because you mentioned you are dedicating this to an extraordinary woman ?
I admire women who have the tenacity to inspire such poetry.
Good luck with the competition and see you on discord steemitschool!
Have a great day ahead!
Yes, I dedicated it to an extraordinary woman. Although all women are examples; of courage, humility, tenacity, love ...
This is befitting to the celebration of women all over the world.
Yes, a tribute to them. Greetings.
Woman, ambassador to respect! A great topic.
By the way, I upvote and followed you. If you want, please give my poetry feedback. Thanks @corderosiete
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Great poem. I really like your stanza style in this poem. Everything comes together in such a coherent way. I also like your word play for instance how you said sodium secretion. Great job. 😎
This is to inform on the behalf of @d-pend that your poetry is seen for the 100 day challenge. Keep up the good work.