Anthem to the sea [Day 11]
Hi Steemit, today, "World Sea Day". I want to dedicate this poem. Also @carmalain7, the sea invites you to immerse yourself in the sand. Thanks to @d-pend. The plate is served.
Anthem to the sea
Anthem to the sea
A new horizon,
I perceive your pen
Seen in the distance,
You write poems
In the distant cloud.
I am your captive reader,
Between the sun and the stars
I find your rhyme
as water for your body.
Sitting on the sand
Where your voice moans
A true way
Of emancipation.
Blue eyes
Draw the reverberation
Of the Cosmos on
The voice of the sea.
Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend [Beginner group] made for Steemit School
Reading notes: Beginner
Original by @corderosiete
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[Day 11/100]
I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness
Day 2 traditional-fishermen
Day 3 river-goblins
Day 4 persistence-mirror
Day 5 in-the-apse
Day 6 sea-mermaid
Day 7 shore-fisherman
Day 8 my-wild-guitar
Day 9 desolation
Day 10 desolation II
While reading this, the story of Hemingway's 'The Old Man and the Sea' streaks in my mind.
Thank you
Thanks for the compliment friend.
Happy a world sea day. And your poetry always beautiful words.
Keep up!
Thank you, grateful for your words
¡Hermoso poema, hermano! Cada vez, mejor, a pasos agigantados. El mar despierta tu musa.
Gracias, cada vez más enamorado de la poesía.
This is really good man
Thank you
This is to inform on the behalf of @d-pend that your poetry is seen for the 100 day challenge. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the deference.
almost sensual, you choices of words, like admiring the memory of a distant lover. I think cosmic is the perfect way to describe the sea, it always seems greater than the confines of this world, or sometimes even memory.
Thanks for your wise words. Greetings.