Agony of an existence/Original poem – [100 Days poetry challenge (Day #17)]
Agony of an existence
excrete ocher liquids
for the saga of the executioner.
They scream in pain when they see the knife.
In agony, they stop breathing.
The reflection of a shadow disappears,
Limited existence.
In ignorance to survive
Conscious or unconscious
We absorb the suffering of a life.
Let's click on the offer of corpses.
Let's sing to conscious meals,
Festive eyes for cereals and vegetables
With love they deliver their fruits
Matured by time.
Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit School
Reading notes: Beginner
Original by @corderosiete
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[Day 17/100]
I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness
Day 2 traditional-fishermen
Day 3 river-goblins
Day 4 persistence-mirror
Day 5 in-the-apse
Day 6 sea-mermaid
Day 7 shore-fisherman
Day 8 my-wild-guitar
Day 9 desolation
Day 10 desolation II
Day 11 Anthem to the sea
Day 12 I'm strange in my city
Day 13 solemn-desert
Day 14 World of poets
Day 15 Sorrow
Day 16 Hero of love
If I understood this correctly, I read it as an ode to vegetarianism. Which reminds me of this song, by the Smiths, Meat is Murder
This is friend.
This is how we survive daily in the world we live in.
Greetings sir.
We can make a change. Greetings friend.
Yes, we want that.
Hmmm "let's click on the offer of corpses".
This carries great significance. You keep getting better and better, keep steeming boss
Thanks for your words.
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Thanks friend. Your words are an honor
This is to inform on the behalf of d-pend that your poetry has been seen for 100 day challenge. Keep up the good work.