Sorrow /Original poem – [100 Days poetry challenge (Day #15)]
Sorrow
There is sadness in my existence,
Iridium splinters trapped in the brain,
Soft hands for extraction.
Sorrow!
Crystals float in the apse of the temple.
Fresh cocoon of the dawn
Sacrifice of time.
Sorrow!
Ignoring the reflection of the mirror in each step of mine,
spilling every drop of nectar
in the Atacama desert
Sorrow!
The man that I am disappears,
It hurts spirit
It is dismembered in silence.
Sorrow!
I would like to die for a moment
Awakening and possessing sidereal energy
initiating an atoned existence.
Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit School
Original by @corderosiete
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I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness
Day 2 traditional-fishermen
Day 3 river-goblins
Day 4 persistence-mirror
Day 5 in-the-apse
Day 6 sea-mermaid
Day 7 shore-fisherman
Day 8 my-wild-guitar
Day 9 desolation
Day 10 desolation II
Day 11 Anthem to the sea
Day 12 I'm strange in my city
Day 13 solemn-desert
Day 14 World of poets
very expressive and well-written, cordero:)
Your words encourage me to improve. Thank you.
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STOPYour choice of diction is splendid, and well chosen. And the scenery of the poem feels right
Thanks friend