Solemn desert [Day 13]
Solemn desert
Solemn desert
Desert, I see
like the Cosmos
cries over the shoulder blades
with sores.
Sunny day
Ocher reflection,
Dry breeze
Impetus of particles
Shady nights
Icy wind
Vote of the gods
For your peace of mind
Sand tree
Dried fruit.
Fights,
Persists,
Exists.
The images are of Pixabay 2
Reading notes: Beginner
Original by @corderosiete
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I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness
Day 2 traditional-fishermen
Day 3 river-goblins
Day 4 persistence-mirror
Day 5 in-the-apse
Day 6 sea-mermaid
Day 7 shore-fisherman
Day 8 my-wild-guitar
Day 9 desolation
Day 10 desolation II
Day 11 anthem-to-the-sea
Está hermoso tu poema amigo. Exitos!
Gracias amiga. Saludos.
Rich sensorial images inspired by the desert, @corderosiete. Good luck!
Thanks @maryncabrera. Praying that luck would smile.
Beauty style of poetry today. Love it.
Thanks friend.
I love the the structure of your poetry
And like always, very good, keep steeming mate.
Thanks friend. and Congratulations for the well-deserved triumph.
Your simplicity is just flawless @corderosiete. I learn much from you. My poem today is day 8 since my account was hacked and I recovered it after 4 days. Hopefully I will catch up with you. Keep it up brother!
Friend, I did not answer your comment because it was hidden. You must have a virus. Grateful for your words. Greetings.
It was hidden because I was hacked last week so now I have low ratings. You can open it, don’t worry about anything. Steemit has helped me to recover my account.
So nice and you achieved some great rhythm in this free verse as well:)
Your words are music to my ears.
I really like how you imagine about sand movement on the desert. Beautiful.
Thanks, yes, pure imagination.
The desert turns out to be a 'cold' place.
Great entry into the 100 Days Poetry Challenge
Thank you