Sea mermaid [Original poem - 100 Days poetry challenge (Day #6)]

in #poetry6 years ago

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Sea mermaid

Sea mermaid

Yes, the appearance of a beautiful woman,
Fish tail and such an irresistible voice
that your existence offers as a gift
under the reverberation of the cosmos.

With a hypnotic song, you seal the essence of the fisherman
daughter of Terpsichore, cold blood runs through your being,
immolating the mast,
you extinguish the lineage.

The death of the fisherman is your coveted totem
Morbid pleasure for the agony,
eyes that pierce human pain
and caresses death.

You return to the vastness of the ocean
in search of innocent fishermen,
You are an ambassador of torture
your satiety for pain does not diminish.

Sirena de mar

Sí, apariencia de una mujer hermosa,
Cola de pez y una voz tan irresistible
que tu existencia ofrece como regalo
bajo la reverberación del cosmos.

Con canción hipnótica, sellas la esencia del pescador
hija de Terpsícore, sangre fría corre por tu ser,
inmolas el mástil,
extingues el linaje

La muerte del pescador es tu codiciado tótem
Mórbido placer por la agonía,
ojos que perforan el dolor humano
y acaricia la muerte.

Regresas a la inmensidad del océano
en busca de inocentes pescadores,
Eres embajadora de la tortura
tu saciedad por el dolor no disminuye.

Reading notes: Beginner

Original by @corderosiete

The images are of PIXABAY

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I love that you wrote this. This is new and cool too

Thanks friend

The flow and imagery of your writing works well, I feel.

I love these lines especially:

that your existence offers as a gift
under the reverberation of the cosmos.

and

eyes that pierce human pain
and caresses death.

You have some great imagery in this poem. My favorite is the idea of the fisherman as a coveted totem.

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