Kill them with Kindness - Original Poem Steemit Exclusive ( Educational Poetry)
Kill them will kindness
Be open for blindness
Just search through the posts
But don't you get lost
Share couple of nice words
Try to merge your worlds
Forget all your intentions
Just read with comprehension
Comment and Upvote
Leave others profile on a positive note
Resteem if you really enjoyed
What the author deployed
Go propose in discord that post
Promote it is not a cause lost
Help a Minnow in need
Upvote its whole weekly feed
If you happen to be a whale
Don't get angry cause others get pale
Give an answer to a strangers' pm
May be that will be your favorite fan
Kill them with kindness at once
You have to keep supporting this stance
All good will come back to you
So be alive before kindness kills you too
By Angel Veselinov
Thank you all for reading another one of my poems. Just wanted to kill you with kindness today. I am glad that things are going pretty well in our community. Thank you all for the great involvement without you all this would not be possible. Here is my daily contribution. Hope you like it. God Bless. Peace and Love.
Here are the previous Issues of the STEEMIT POETS UNITED community.
Here are some of my other poems :
Educational Steemit Poems | Motivational Poems | Cleansing Poetry | Misc Stuff |
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| Do You Really Believe. Surprise. FInd Your Way. Be Thankful. Don't Stop to Share. Worth the Wait. You've got to impress. Curation. Cant'Get Enough. Don't Wait. I have got to try. I cannot wait. Have No Fear. Just SteemIt. The Burnout. The 10 Steem Commandments. I have a Dream. That Steem Price. | Do You Have a Will. Have No Fear. A Day In A Life of a Fool. Want to feel good again. | Poetry Session. Feel Again. Listen to your heart. | Steemit poets United. Our first Post For SPU Community. Memories Poetry Dice #23 Growth Written for a contest Nocturnal Nostalgia Dtube Spoken Poetry Collaboration Poetry Dice- Fun. Poetry Dice Callenge week 22 Endarkenment Nihilistic Rainbow Contest #3. Loneliness Steemit Poetry Contest#11 |
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It made me smile. I liked that you used the rhymes consistently throughout the entire poem. It should be used as a minnow's creed. ;0)
Thank you. I am glad that you liked it. Appreciate your comment. Thanks for stopping by. Enjoy your stay :P
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I like it... amazing artistic way to get the message across. Way to go buddy. Let's keep spreading positive vibes.
love it! witty, positive and well written. positive vibrations :D
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I really liked this poem. I'm usually not a huge fan of rhyming poems, they can be distracting to the message, but overall the rhyming flowed well and felt effortless. Love the overall message, to kill with kindness, promoting positivity and such. Also enjoyed the light-humorous tones, such as the pale whale stanza.
If I had to pick something that bothered me, would be that the rhyme 'post' with 'lost' got used twice, and it gets to my head way more than it should! Also, the line "Leave others profile on a positive note" felt way longer than the line before "Comment and Upvote", so the flow felt a bit unnatural there as well.
Other than that, I have really enjyoed this poem and good job!
Thanks :) for the comment :P Loved it. For the things that you did not like I can tell that you are right :P on both of them probably . Thanks for pointing out something that people on this site usually don't afraid of getting flagged lolz. It is good to know your flaws too not only your good sides . :) God Bless You. Love and Peace.
Glad you took the feedback constructively! I only criticise poetry I like. Why? Because I believe in it and I believe it can become even better. For those that I don't like, it could be that I miss the point, or that is it subjectively not interesting to me, so I would not merit to give much feedback there. So, whenever I criticise you, be proud :P
Edit: I also like when people criticise me, because I need to see my flaws. We can get so attached to our poetry, that we might be blinded and not see our mistakes.
Jesus... My God.... You are gooooood...... I love your poetry.... The rhymes and reason are beautiful.