Hot water! A fiction

in Freewriters4 years ago

Dear friends

I am pleased to participate in the daily challenge of @mariannewest, Tuesday's message: hot water. I hope you enjoy.


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Then knowing that he had her wedding ring, John's wife to relax decided to go to the shower, open the hot water jet, to relax and so she could think about what surprise she could give him.

After dressing, she went to the hairdresser to change with a new image with a red hair tone, to surprise John, then she also adorned herself with a necklace of fancy pearls that her mother had given her.

That night they had agreed to have dinner at a restaurant near John's work, it was already 8:00 p.m. and there he was waiting for her. Already a little restless because she had spent the agreed time, a girl unknown to him enters the restaurant, so he didn't pay much attention.

When she saw John, she went to the table where he was sitting and said:

"How are you honey? Can I make you company?"

Looking up, John was surprised since she was his wife. He just managed to say:

"You are beautiful and unrecognizable"

After saying it, he kissed her cheek and helped her sit at the table that was set for two.

(to be continue...)

© 2019, Felix Garcia P. All rights reserved

Waiting for your upvotes, comments and resteem.

@felixgarciap


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This is the continuation of Mark's adventures, you can read the previous episodes in the following links:

01 The jungle21 Coffee Mug42 Describe what ...!
02 Main street23 Shawl43 Brussel sprout
03 Funny incidents24 Backwoods44 Tick tock
04 Fern25 Sunscreen45 Bonus
05 vegetables26 Business trip46 Hurry up honey
06 Disposable diaper27 Skiing47 A long white beard
07 Not moving28 Barbecue48 Crazy eyes
08 A broken toe29 Sesame sticks49 Snot
09 Stovetop30 Good surprise50 Virus
10 Gutless31 Satellite51 Circus dog
11 Napkins32 Wedding52 Yarns
12 Envy33 Bright light53 Calm down baby
13 Recycle34 Fresh air54 Double life
14 Wool sweater35 Details55 Itchy neck
15 Black-eyed peas36 Cannibals56 Revolution
16 Chocolate cake37 Radish57 Dehydrate
17 Understand38 Cleft58 Night sky
18 Bandage39 Pregnant59 Not normal
19 We are young40 Facelift60 Lame
20 The big test41 Enjoy the day61 Chirp

Also here you can enjoy the Mary´s adventures.

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Wow, that redheaded girl is really beautiful!
Good job, buddy Felix.

Thank you very much dear @zeleiracordero. Cheers.

A girl loves a new look!

A new look can bring out the beauty from within that much more powerful. What a loving gesture for her husband.

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