A broken toe! A weekend freewrite

in #freewrite5 years ago (edited)

Dear friends

This is the weekend freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #weekendfreewrite, to write this piece please read here. Sandra spends a few moments of bewilderment after the attempted robbery that afternoon. When the police arrive, they realize the absurdity of the situation. I hope you enjoy my fiction story.

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A broken toe

Inside, the siren call slacked off, to be replaced by a single note of harmony

Sandra felt that her head was spinning, now with this situation with the man on the floor, her senses asked for some peace of mind.

When the ambulance arrived they took the man to the hospital, she was left alone in that office. Meanwhile when Mark arrived he saw her now transfigured by fright.

Mark knowing the seriousness of the situation had previously called the police.

When the police arrived they began to question them regarding the businesses that were being carried out there, after many questions and answers, Mark sighing told them:

"Yeah. Not renting saves me a bucketload of money."

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The police then told them, you should be more careful not to offer false promises that can tell others that you have a lot of money.

Mark replied:

"People live on illusions and in our franchise we offer people to achieve attainable illusions.

What has happened today is a product of the inequalities that our modern society has led us "

They scrutinized him thinking how innocent he was.

Sandra burst into tears, telling them they are certainly doubting them, and told them "what we do here is work for others."

a broken toe

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They realized that his hand was bandaged. So they asked him:

"By the way tell us how he hurt his hand?"

He then disregarding told them:

"Ah, that was silly, in my house when I closed a drawer my hand got stuck unintentionally."

Smiling they couldn't believe he was going to express such a vain feeling.

Completing the interrogation, they left leaving Sandra and Mark with their intrigues.

In the meantime, Mary, knowing of the mishap they had suffered in the office, called them by phone and she expressed their full support.

(to be continued).

Waiting for your upvotes , comments and resteem.

@felixgarciap

© 2019, Felix Garcia P. All rights reserved

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This story is the continuation of Mark's adventures, you can read the previous episodes by following the links below.

Also here you can enjoy the Mary´s adventures.

Make sure you visit the Freewrite House!!!

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It is true. Most people do live on illusions and if they do not they are called nevative. Thanks for the story. 💕

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Selling illusions - that is what most businesses do...

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