Bright light! A weekend freewrite

in Freewriters5 years ago

Dear friends

This is the weekend freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #weekendfreewrite, to write this piece please read. After the ceremony and the wedding party, Sandra and Miguel finally arrive at the hotel room to begin their honeymoon. I hope you enjoy my fiction story.


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Bright Light

Her eyes were closing, her chin fell towards her chest when the blaring of a horn jolted her

She now a little exhausted after the wedding ceremony with Miguel and with her stomach full of so much food that was served at the celebration party, she just hoped to escape with her boyfriend to the hotel.

The guests were attentive to her and were not leaving them a respite, on the other hand Miguel already supremely tired only aspired to leave.

In an oversight of his friends they finally moved, upon arriving in the room Miguel collapsed in the bed to the full width and covered his face.

She filled with happiness thought that this was a theater scene in which Miguel wanted her to worry.

A pillowcase covered his head and she thought that it would do the job.


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She came to see what was happening, was surprised to see that his face was purple, immediately tried to revive him and began to give him mouth to mouth breathing.

Miguel did not react, the minutes passed seemed like an eternity, she picked up the phone and called the reception to report what was happening, then the five minutes she heard a hooting of the siren of an ambulance.

The paramedics quickly entered the room and applied blows and massages on Miguel's chest, he reacted and on a stretcher he was transferred to the hospital.

In the cabin were some medicines giving an aspect of disorder, since.

they stopped making plastic bags

manufacturing costs had risen a lot and the material to make them was scarce. Paramedics knew that this disorder could not lead to anything good.


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Finally the ambulance arrived at the Hospital, Sandra was in a taxi and arrived at the same time.

Miguel's face was already pink and when he saw Sandra in the emergency room he smiled, saying:

"Honey, what happened to me? I was walking down a long hallway where I saw a bright light."

Sandra exclaimed

"Love, don't think about it, now we are together again, I love you madly."

(to be continued).

Waiting for your upvotes , comments and resteem.

@felixgarciap

© 2019, Felix Garcia P. All rights reserved

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This story is the continuation of Mark's adventures, you can read the previous episodes by following the links below.

01 The jungle21 Coffee Mug
02 Main street23 Shawl
03 Funny incidents24 Backwoods
04 Fern25 Sunscreen
05 vegetables26 Business trip
06 Disposable diaper27 Skiing
07 Not moving28 Barbecue
08 A broken toe29 Sesame sticks
09 Stovetop30 Good surprise
10 Gutless31 Satellite
11 Napkins32 Wedding
12 Envy
13 Recycle
14 Wool sweater
15 Black-eyed peas
16 Chocolate cake
17 Understand
18 Bandage
19 We are young
20 The big test

Also here you can enjoy the Mary´s adventures.

Make sure you visit the Freewrite House!!!

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@felixgarciap I was holding my breath and praying Miguel did not pass on his wedding night.

@myjob He still has a lot of life ahead of him.

@felixgarciap that is good to hear.

How scary to have that happen at your wedding night!!

Oh God, you almost killed Miguel on his wedding night. So much preparation for that moment and he almost does not tell. Poor Sandra! Tremendous scare!

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