Building Fire

in #art5 years ago

Things blowing up.

People eskaping (escaping), jumping out of buildings, landing near cars, like an old tornado Twister film.

Illumination = Inspiration

The following is something written by a nine or ten year old, or something like that. The kid who wrote and drew up this story was none other than me around 1995 or something like that. Grammar corrections, updates, edits, are added and shown in bold, in order to help show you how things were.

I also added commas, periods, punctuation marks.


Jail Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:03:50.png
Fire 1 Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:05:02.png
Fire 2 Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:06:16.png
Fire 3 Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:06:42.png

The fire which was broken up (spreading or stopped), was a big fire, it blow up (blew up) some building (buildings) and towers.

Fire Intro Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:07:26.png


Some people was (were) in it but after got out very very fast right by cars they exskape (escape) to.

Exskape Screenshot at 2018-07-19 12:50:54.png

Jumping Out of Windows

Right after the buildings blow up (erupted),

Blow Up Screenshot at 2018-07-19 12:53:10.png

some people jump out (jumped out) of there (their) windows

Their Screenshot at 2018-07-19 12:54:41.png

just to get out before there (their) home where they live (lived) got blow (blown) up with them because they don't want to die even if some was (were)

Were Screenshot at 2018-07-19 12:56:58.png

on the 50th story high (which is sky high), they knew that they rather jump out of the 5th (50th) story to the ground and get hurt then (than) not jump out at all and die in the building.

Than Screenshot at 2018-07-19 12:58:01.png


But ofer (others) didn't, they try ofer (other) ways to get out, they got trap (trapped) in the building.

Other Screenshot at 2018-07-19 12:59:05.png

Fire Fighters

After the buildings fell down and blow up (exploded), the fire truck came and stop (stopped) the fire.

Buildings Fell Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:00:10.png

Super Heroes

Lot of other people came, got all the hurt peaple (people) and took them to the hosipol (hospital) and others was (were) fund (found).

People Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:00:51.png

Rebuilding NYC WTC 9/11

In a year from then (a year later), the place was all ready for rebuilding agian (again).

Again Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:01:48.png

Law & Order

The bad guy that don it or ton it (done it) was funt or fund (found) and gone (sent) to jail for life.

Found Screenshot at 2018-07-19 13:02:39.png


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1995-07-01 - Saturday - 06:00 PM apx - At a theater in Astoria - Apollo 13 - Screenshot at 2019-11-08 22:34:15.png

Apollo 13

1995-07-01 - Saturday - 06:00 PM apx - At a theater in Astoria, Oregon, USA - In July of 1995, we saw Apollo 13 instead of the Power Rangers: The Movie. I'm guessing that we saw it on the first day of July of 1995. It was on Saturday. I would generally spend my Independence Day weekend at their house on the coast. Therefore, it was probably on that day.

Annual Tradition

As usual for the summer, Aunt Karen would come take me over to her house for a weekend each summer in the 1990's, generally speaking. I was always looking forward to seeing Uncle Jim Williams, Karen, their kids, the beach, etc. One year, maybe in 1995, me and my brother were at Karen's for like an entire week. I'm not sure if that was 1994 or 1995 or what.

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