chaos and order
inert and energetic
cycles of boom and bust
eons of wrong and just
indifferent and wanting
reluctant and eager
era of growth and crash
decade to build and trash
remaining and changing
loving and hating
time of living and starving
years forgetting and reliving
laughing and crying
victorious and defeated
days of shit and supreme
seconds to hide and beam
sovereign and slave
all seeing and blindfolded
circles full color and of grey
moments that fade and still stay
brain and heart
happy and sad
event of sadness and glory
example of beauty and so gory
logically and chaotic
fight and reconcile
spirals of violence and loving
instantly pulling and shoving
heroically and scared
If you want to read more, check out some more stuff I wrote:
my valentine
a limerick about m,y birthday
a circle shaped short story (J.A.S.E.)
luctor et emergo
a poetic poetry review - daily dose 24
an experiment with word shape and meaning
excercise with shape and words
coincidence?
fifty - fifty
feelings in motion
my drowning land
nothing from nothing
infinite bandwidth
just a limerick
i've always been me
life is suffering
An anecdotal poetry experiment
When it rains it pours
Dreaming about Steeming
For the love of stones
Mind, body and soul
United dreams
Talk about addiction
is this the new DD banner?
Daily Dose #30
Free the drugs
And if you like them, please upvote, resteem or follow! All are appreciated.
Madevi.
umuntu ngumuntu ngabantu!
Life is full of opposites! Ups and downs. Oscillations. Well written :)
Thanks! I tried to convey that these opposites can be true at the same time as well.
Nice poem @madevi, pulls you in and pushes you out... =)
Well, i actually did or do feel many of them at the same time, they are not mutually exclusive imo. That's why i used "and" on every line. I sometimes do feel energetic and inert at the same time. Thanks for commenting and upvoting!
Great job! I love all the contrasts. The pic caught my attention and made me click. Thanks. Following.
Thanks, glad you liked it. I knew the pic would draw in loads of people ;) The contrasts represent things inside myself, present and past.
Another nice piece man. Thanks for sharing ... Excuse me for the quick comment but I got 14 more entries to go through :P You are doing just fine even without my comments haha :) God Bless.
lol, thanks, i told you there would come a day :)
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