poetic exercise with shape and words (about Deeva)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)


deeva twitter.jpg


Not sure if this qualifies as poetry or even prose, i was just experimenting with words within a square. The aim was to tell the story of my purrrfect Deeva (pictured above) and have all the lines be the same length. I thought about making it rhyme as well, one way or another, but that's beyond me for now. It seems that the difference in font on Steemit broke the shape i was aiming for so i posted a screenshot from my text editor. Hope you like it.


deeva.png

@madevi


If you want to read more, check out some more stuff I wrote:

coincidence?
fifty - fifty
feelings in motion
my drowning land
nothing from nothing
infinite bandwidth
just a limerick
i've always been me
life is suffering
An anecdotal poetry experiment
When it rains it pours
Dreaming about Steeming
For the love of stones
Mind, body and soul
United dreams
Talk about addiction





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And if you like them, please upvote, resteem or follow! All are appreciated.

Madevi.

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Pets are definitely like a family member! It was cool reading about the bond with your furry friend, and the format of it being in the square added some nice aesthetics! Good stuff and keep it up :)

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