a circle shaped short story (J.A.S.E.)

in #poetsunited6 years ago

Just Another Silly Experiment



It being monday i didn't have much time to write real poetry, but i did manage this though. It's another thought experiment with words, shape and meaning. Mind you, these are just the baby steps i am taking for i am still dreaming of a rhyming poem in the shape of a dog about a dog... One thing i have learned is that the font isn't suitable because it isn't square. This thing looked more like an American football than a circle before i fixed the aspect ratio.

Big shout out to @lilyraabe and @falseyedols for encouraging me to go on with these silly experiments, much love!


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@madevi


If you want to read more, check out some more stuff I wrote:

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an experiment with word shape and meaning
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coincidence?
fifty - fifty
feelings in motion
my drowning land
nothing from nothing
infinite bandwidth
just a limerick
i've always been me
life is suffering
An anecdotal poetry experiment
When it rains it pours
Dreaming about Steeming
For the love of stones
Mind, body and soul
United dreams
Talk about addiction





Free the drugs


And if you like them, please upvote, resteem or follow! All are appreciated.

Madevi.

umuntu ngumuntu ngabantu!

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Hahaha I like it! This one gave me some chuckles too. Thanks for the shoutout, and I especially like how you somehow worked our names into the circular poem itself!

Well, i found out that even a circle thats 25 characters wide has a bit too much space to only talk about a circle, not so much to mention... so i just went with the flow and you two came to mind, so that's why.

Yessss you did it and I love it! Upvoted. Keep it comin’. :)

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@madevi bravo 👏👏👏

Lemme slide into your dm on discord.
I've gat a lot to learn from you.

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