@Rondonson's Rap Challenge # 14: My Entry - "The Great Design" (Original Song)
I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.
Verse 1:
Know your state of mind, simple/complex in the Great Design
Yes, you are what you eat, so never eat the grape in vine
Write the greatest lines, shake the room and wake to signs, the Great Divine
Master Everlasting out the masses trapped in cable lines
Able, I'm, modern moderator, Cain and Abel, twined
Vessel, sheath, & sharpest sword, knowing my blade is fine
Tape rewind, giving you time because you're way behind
Process of true progress is your impact with your weight behind
Complacent kind don't know what I'm getting at, they wait to find
What they define as opportunity to take more shade than shine
They decline, falling back on broken slate reclined
Climbing towards the mountaintops, and stopping's not a fate of mine
Clay Design, I came from dust amongst the wake of time
Created by the highest of all powers, not a Frankenstein
Hated by, those who disregard the way of Christ
I'm aided by the angels ready to wrangle from the gated skies...
Song Lyrics Copyrighted By @Verbal-D
Thank you for reading & listening to this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.
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@verbal-d damn...where were you when I competed?! I really like the feedback you provided the other artists. If you have a chance, I would really love some feedback on any of my previous entries.
"Stop Being Lazy"
"Lil Migs"
"You Seen My Gifts"
Your entry was dope AF btw 🔥🔥🔥
Oh no doubt bro, I got you. I'll definitely check out your entries and give some quality feedback. Feedback is needed in our Hip Hop Community yes indeed. And I appreciate you reaching out truly. Thanks for listening to my entry, I am really glad you enjoyed the approach I took this time around. I am glad to be back in the Challenges. I took a little break. But I missed it truly.
True, I'm always a little hesitant on providing feedback because I never know how someone might react. You know like "who's this guy trying to give me feedback!?" lol
It is all about how you write it I feel. But even if they don't like my feedback, I keep it moving, but I definitely try to point out the good and highlight one main weakness they can improve on if I can slide it in the compliments. We all can improve. I know my flaws and sharpen at them to get closer to perfection
I'm sure I'll be more active once I get my accolades up...good stuff brotha.
All good bro, I'll be sure to check out your entries tomorrow for sure. Hang tight!
Flaaaaaaaaaaaaaamezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!
I am now always looking out for your encouraging comments bro. I appreciate your support to the fullest for real! Lol thanks for the positive energy boost just now. It was well needed
No problem, man. I'm trying to support the real cats on steemit. A lot of dudes are out here pandering like the hot sauce in Clinton's purse. lol
Same here bro, been trying to do that since day one. Appreciate you as I have said before, and yeah I already know lol I love me some hot sauce though!
So much finger pointing yo! Hha, nice one mr verbal-d .
This is wha i call, lyrical magic yo!!
How can i work with this, you've got a contact? I would love to drop a track for the contest.
Thank you very much, I appreciate that and you listening.
The finger pointing are for specific people, they know who they are, 'cause when I strike a chord, they feel a certain way and gotta react immediately lol.
You can contact me on Discord my username is the same there verbal-d or on steemit.chat, my username is the same there as well.
As far as submitting your tracks to be used for the Rap Challenge Contest, you would have to contact @rondonson personally as he is the host of the contest.
Man to bad you didn't get this one in before i did my review!!!
It Is still eligible though lol, you can always edit your review, thanks for your sentiments bro, nothing is impossible :) We get 7 days to edit our posts. Show some love haha
Hahah i like to keep my post immutable!! Actually it's @rondonson contest so it would be up to him. I personally think you would would of snatched first.
All good bro, thank you for your kindness, i was waiting for the video submission post but he posted it later than usual at like 430am my time and since I am 9 hours ahead I fell asleep waiting and then posted it within the 24 hour period of his post. So hopefully I should still be Eligible. But either way I was just glad to put that out there to share with everyone no doubt
Yea he did post it late....When i was doing my review I went through all of the post and what was in the submission thread. I think going forward anything that is posted on #rapchallenge on Friday should be considered.
Yeah for this upcoming week, I won't wait for the submission post so long like this past week. I will just post it on Friday and then share it to the submission post way later when I wake up. It's inconvenient being 9 hours ahead for certain things like these, but alllll goooodddd.
Sharp skills my friend!!!!!!!!!
Thank you very much my friend, I appreciate it.
now thats a great one....
Thank you very much, I am glad you liked this one, appreciate you listening
hey brother , you did it wonderful , great lyrics and vocal , as I may said before I don't listen to rap much , but only to good ones , this one was one of the good ones.
Thank you very much bro
I appreciate that truly, that is the best compliment to hear
When people don't listen to a specific genre, but they will listen to my music within it. What a blessing.
Dope spiting and deep lyrics. You are on fire B.
Thank you bro, still crafting up those bars for your beat, hang tight! Appreciate your patience for real
You are welcome B. Craft as long as you need, I'm here...still standing...still strong. :/ lOl Time is on our side, just do the do and let me know if you need something edit wise. ☺
You already know I will!
These verses and this music is simply delightful! I hope you win!
Thank you for your extremely kind comment. Much appreciated for your feedback and you listening
My pleasure man! :D
Damn really solid rhymes!!
Thank you very much bro, you should hear my other music.
Yea I'll have to check out your YouTube some more soon! Peace!
Yeah no problem, I do all kinds of songs, take your time, no rush. Peace!