Original poetry to my lover 原创诗:填词《眼儿媚》千红易逝,此爱难凋!
I still remember our meet.
That is season with flowers swirling.
Even if in the poor family,
and of very small stature,
you are also a powerful man.
--
Each year wild geese fly south in pair,
meanwhile the flowers fall again and again.
Beautiful blossom can wither away.
We are loving each other so deeply.
The love will not fade away.
《眼儿媚》
落花独立梦痕遥,
犹记识君骄。
难为家困,
纵然影小,
但使心高。
每逢微雨飞双燕,
堂下砌花娆。
千红易逝,
两情相悦,
此爱难凋。
[小译]
依稀记得
相逢在一个落花飞舞的时节
来自小山村的你
身材并不高大的你
却有着强大内心的你
又到了秋雨纷纷,大雁南飞的季节
落花洒满了乡间石阶
纵使再娇艳的鲜花也有逝去的一天
只要你我彼此爱着对方
美好的爱便会比鲜花更灿烂,永不凋谢
看了 @sylvia1997的新文 今日陌生的,是昨日最亲的某某
以及 @mrspointm 的一场游戏一场梦很多感触。
自己呢是一个没有故事的人,不知道是应该感觉幸运,还是遗憾。
于是我决定了——我还是继续秀恩爱吧。
我是一个没有故事的人,写首诗自我安慰吧,假装我如此与众不同。
有没有故事要看你怎么定义故事,哈哈
故事大于0,但无限趋近于0
您说的我也同意。有人会把小事情感到很大的。又有人是正反对的。我想@tvb是个菩萨。
不是风动,仁者心动。哈哈。
没有故事,多幸福
写得多好呀!
我也觉得,我觉得我这个写得空前的好哈哈哈,发完我就后悔了,是不是可以配点图投稿给someone试试
是的,这个可以有。👍
这是您自己做的吗?韩国一般的programmer没有您那样感想的。
是的,是我自己写的呢。因为感情深,所以才能写出真诚的文字。Poetry is from my heart, which is in love.
这也是个才能。不是每个人都能用“字”來把自己的感想和心中的话标出来呢。
我这个在圈内顶多是中等水平,写出来就是抒发一下自己,谢谢你的夸奖。
原来中国区这么多的诗人,哈哈。
我一共就看见两个人。。。哪有那么多。。。
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老姐好棒,中英都是自己做的?
嗯,英语不好,不知道译的行不行
You've hit the mark.
This is truly exceptional.
This is mind-blowing.
You've captured my attention.
I'm loving it!
Incredible work.
This is beyond amazing.
This is truly remarkable.
You've got a bright future ahead.
Your post inspires me to write poetries. I should. Did you compose chinese or english first?
The poetry is written in Chinese firstly. This a archaic poetry. It use the strict form of Song dynasty. Song dynasty is about 700-1000 years ago. I wrote it with the archaic form, then translate it into English. Thank you for reading!
This is absolutely epic!
This is awe-inspiring.
Great content!
Well explained.
You've got skills to envy.