Finish The Story - Week #46

in #finishthestory5 years ago (edited)

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A contest with a pot of 10 STEEM + 4 @steembasicincome shares? You're in the right place!

212 @steembasicincome shares awarded till now, plus 22.558 SBD and 113 STEEM, through the contest in 45 weeks!


What awaits within the Bananafish treasure chest?

1st place: n. 5 STEEM

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popular vote: n. 2 steembasicincome share (remember to vote your favorite!)

Best comment to the stories: n. 2 steembasicincome shares

And bam baby, we’re back! Hope we all had fun with Quest In the Realms, did you miss this as much as me?! @calluna here, once again the worse navigator has been left to steer the ship, Antigua anyone? Barbados? As tempting as the fresh rum smells, how about an adventure in an Austrian graveyard…

The week, I am joined by the incredibly talented @dirge who has crafted a real gem of an opening for you, packed full of potassium potential, a story that could go many ways, where will you take it!

Good luck, brave storytellers; into the depths we go!


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And now.. let's dive into the story!

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Leitner

by @dirge

Benjamin Leitner, son of General Reinold Leitner, grandson of Count Dietrich Leitner, stepped from the stagecoach and lit his pipe. The night was cold, the sky a vast black emptiness. The moon, if it had shown itself at all that night, was gone, and nothing but the light cast by Benjamin’s lantern offered solace from the creeping dark.

He’d reached the graveyard, home of his family tomb and its historic dynasty. It was a forbidden place, the site of his late mother’s suicide, where Leitners were entombed stretching back centuries. He hated this place, more than anywhere else on earth. But he’d come, alone as ordered to. He’d come, as he had no other option but to do so. And he’d brought the gold.

The letter was written in her typical style. Loquacious, expounding on the nature of their relationship, apologizing for her affairs, thanking him for standing by her throughout it, remaining at her side despite all the controversy of the town. Despite even her own parents telling him to abandon her as a lost cause.

She’d not only dragged herself down into the mud. But him as well. Benjamin the financier, of Wolfstone and Kauffman, now the cuckold of all of Austria. But worst of all, she’d tarnished the name of Leitner.

And when the accusation came, of witchcraft and devilry, of black magic and the most bestial of sacrilege, of whoring in the night endowed with opiates unto madness. Well, it was no wonder when Kauffman wanted out.

And still he stood by her.

Should he have been surprised when the letter came, demanding the last of his finances or else she’d accuse him in the papers of having masterminded it all? Of being an original scholar of the black arts?
That would render the Leitner name into devilry.

No. He couldn’t allow that.

Benjamin finished his pipe, the tobacco charred and ashen. He cast the ash into the wind then slipped the cherry wood pipe into his coat pocket, beside the letter crested with her seal.

Melinda. Oh, you wench.

I’ll be in the crypts, waiting.

He suspected she wasn’t alone. Benjamin suspected the whole carnal tribe to be down there, waiting for her.

Well, so much the better. Let them all wait for his arrival. Let them all see the truth, the forbidden history denied to the world. Stretching back into the foundation of the soil. Let them know who it was that the Leitner’s may be.

He stepped across the grass, peering at the graves of his forbears till he reached the central crypt. The iron gate was ajar and the darkness seemingly impenetrable. They were down there, waiting for him.

“Melinda,” Benjamin said to himself. “It could have been different. So different. But you threatened my name. For that, I cannot forgive you.”

He entered the crypts.

“Time to meet the family,” he thought to himself, almost with a laugh.

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Join the fun! Here is how this contest works:

  • An unfinished fiction story or a script is posted.

  • You finish it with your own post or a comment in the comment section. A limit of 500 words is recommended.

  • WIN 10 STEEM + 4 @steembasicincome shares to the writers with the best endings and comments.

The results will be out on Wednesday - March 6th, 14:00 PM GMT+7 avg. (U.S. West Coast time zone). Submission deadline: Tuesday - March 5th, 14:00 PM GMT+7 (U.S. West Coast time zone). You may vote your favorite story until the results are out!

A special thanks to @gwilberiol, @dirge, @tristancarax, @theironfelix, @raj808, @brisby, @maverickinvictus, @cyemela, @marcoriccardi, @hidden84, @calluna, @oivas, @ntowl, @f3nix, @felt.buzz, @khasa and @vdux for their precious delegations, making this project a reality! If you like this contest..SPREAD THE GOSPEL! We're grateful for your resteeming and word of mouth. Everything helps to grow together!

GOOD LUCK, BRAVE STORYTELLERS!

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Grimm here, from that @theironfelix entry. Well while I do want to vote for my Ritual mate @theironfelix, who crafted a fine experience of the night had. They shouldn't get the popular vote. I can list many reasons why, but mainly because hacking into this account was hard enough and I despise self-voting. That and I don't want to self-glorify.

So who would get Grimm's love? Why I got the same picking favorites problem like Victor if thee would believe me. I was stuck between @gaby-crb's, @agmoore's and @seesladen's entries. So seeing three knucklehead knights of Austria prancing around and teasing a poor peasant family, I marked them from one to three, respectively. And whomever I hit first was going to get my vote...

After ten minutes of dancing around, I realized I struck number two first... despite collapsing on the rest by accident. No matter, @agmoore wins my popular vote. Just wondering if the light was radiance or just that galaxy's angelic holy magic. Won't know nor do I wish to remember that horrid day of the Radiance when Dreams and Nightmares splitted up for good...

Going to rush back to the Trope area and see if Grimmchild's doing alright!~
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I'm giving my vote to @raj808. Creepy story.

So this is my least favorite part of finish the story. How do you choose excellent over excellent? One author wrote beautifully in two languages. That just stops me in my tracks. But only one, for the first time here, actually inspired me to make a picture. So I guess that will be the decider for me. It's @theironfelix with his spinning, winding descent into decay and corruption. Here's the picture. No, I didn't draw it. I rendered it from an ancient Chinese vase with the aid of GIMP.

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Hi White List Author!

Thanks for being part of our contest community.

Here is a 100% upvote from @contestkings

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It's awesome to be part of your premiere contests family, thanks for the support (why didnt we join earlier!?) 😁

Here be me entry for this contest here~ c:
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Hey! I made an extension post to this if yah can believe it with yer eyes! It's time to return back to these, baby!~
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Awww yes Felix is in!

Hi, @bananafish, this is first time I am in this contest. I wrote in Spanish but there is a translate to English too.
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@sayury/finish-the-story-week-46
Good luck for everybody.

I already made my comment on yer post, imma comment here to see if we can make a PB of most replied comment on a Bananafish contest page ever on debut week.

Welcome to the contest and good luck with your first entry! 😁

Aww so happy to have you, thank you so much for the entry!

I think it's wonderful that you were able to convey that atmosphere in Spanish and English. Thanks for making the effort for us. More enjoyment:)

I am way late to the game but got it in thanks if any of you read it.
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@stever82/finish-the-story-week-46-entry

Too long! Very happy to have you back!

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Oh, Calluna... I'll soon run out of words too... Surely...

I got in with a sneaky last minute entry this week @bananafish. Been really sick recently and not writing much, but this story by @dirge really caught my imagination. Thanks for the great beginning :)

The Writing on the Wall

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Aww yes!! Get in here you sneaky fiction ninja! So very glad you made it, despite sickness, for this spectacular round! And sincerely hope you feel better soon, I know how much it sucks to be beaten by the body, so this is a truly heartfelt hurrah that you are here with us anyway!

He he... yes it was a sneak-fiction-attack 🤣

Glad to be here in this round. I actually read the beginning the day the comp came out and was super impressed and inspired by it. I had some ideas but wanted to let it sink in, then I ended up distracted and forgot until today lol

But saw it earlier, reread and the story/plot for my ending came to me 🙂 hurrah to the power of potassium

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Hello Bananatribe, this is my debut in the finish the story, I hope you like it a little.
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@darthgexe/leitner-week-46-of-finish-the-story

Someday the Nobel Prize, someday.

Wooo yeah, first entry, we couldn't be happier to have you! And what a way to kick off the round!

With a very well deserved curie <3

Ohh yeah baby, I'm very happy with that, I'm literally jumping all over the room... I'm still doing it.

Congrats for your curie @darthgexe!

The first week back after a long and exciting hiatus. Here we go.

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@tristancarax/leitner

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